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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I'll Teach My Daughter To Love Herself

    This poem is so great. You are very talented. The way you paint a vivid description makes the words come alive. Your daughter or at least if you have a ...

    Apr 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Being Myself

    This poem is ....I don't even know the word to describe it. I lovvvvvvve it. I totally understand where your coming from. Its like your misunderstood. You feel like nobody ...

    Dec 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You Don't Know Love

    This is lovely! You made the right choice. If I'm reading between the lines correctly all the person was really there for is for what he can get. Like you ...

    Dec 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: storms

    I feel like this poem is about abuse, yet you correlate it to a storm in your life. I'm not sure, I could be way off, but in my opinion ...

    Dec 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Demons

    This is an interesting poem and I can relate to what you are saying. I mean, we can't really choose our demons. some things just take place. The part I ...

    Dec 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Wake Up

    What is a dream really? That's a question I ask myself. It's crazy, because some of our dreams can be good and some can be not so good. Some dreams ...

    Dec 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: What you are

    This poem is deep, I truly love it. The comparisons are on point. It is an amazing feeling to have a connection with someone and they feel the very same ...

    Dec 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: i travelled the world thirteen times over

    This is a poem with a lot of potential. Literally speaking, if you had traveled around the world thirteen times, I'm pretty sure you'd know a hell of a lot ...

    Dec 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Sky is Blue

    This poem is amazing! There is a lot of imagery here. I like the way you have described the sky in different colors, due to it constantly changing. Your correct ...

    Dec 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Maybe

    I like it ! It kind of makes me want more, I was kind of disappointed that it ended so soon. As I think about it, there are a bunch ...

    Dec 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: On The Edge Of Bliss

    This is in fact short, but sweet. It is direct, but right to the point. Love comes in all shapes and sizes, but you just have to wait. If you.are ...

    Dec 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Don't Call Him Out

    "I'm really liking the way this whole poem is formatted. It rhymes, yet makes since. Also has facts to it about God being near. Everything that's going on in the ...

    Dec 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: School Frustrations.

    A very vivid description of a modern classroom today. I enjoyed reading about it. In a way, it kind of bought back memories having me thinking about Highschool and all ...

    Dec 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: I opened my eyes

    This poem is deep, I really enjoyed reading it. Imagery is on point, I could really get the visual of everything. I also like how you didn't try and make ...

    Dec 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: To Judge

    This is very well written and I love the rhyme, It all make sense, because we live in such a judgmental word. People judge everyday, but fail to look at ...

    Dec 9, 2014


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins