danipower0204

So I really liked this. I really did. You could possibly add a little imagery, but you already have some nice ones there. I especially like "snap some sense into ...

Wow, this totally applies to my life right now. Have you read my feelings? My thoughts? This is crazy. I am also stuck in this situation. Wow... Anyway on to ...

Ok this has huuuge potential. Really. All you need to do with this is flip it, and with that I mean use some literary devices. Instead of telling us that ...

Holy damn I love your poetry. I swear, you're only 16 and write stuff like this? Incredible.'I wish I had the skills you have. Keep on writing, I'll be reading ...

Closed doors , Hidden tears . Music loud drown out The fear. That never goes, Only grows. Music louder Beatin’ drum Takes away The feeling from. From what? You suddenly ...

There's an on-going struggle Between my body and my mind, My body function s like most others, But my mind is of its own rare kind. My body needs to ...

Alright, so I'm tired right now, but I'll do my best! This deserves a review. You are telling us way too much. It was an easy read, but it was ...

Wonderful imagery here. Absolutely wonderful. I wish I were as great as you with imagery - really. I agree with Vball - it takes me into another world, which is ...

The things I like about this poem - it's simple and easy to read, the rhythm is OK, and the structure - it looks nice. However - you're lacking a ...

OK - at first - and pretty much up until the last bit, I thought this poem was about love. Especially in the bits: Fresh and red, such Brilliant art, ...

I thought you were on my side, I thought you 'd chosen me, Over healing something, That point is lost at sea. I thought you'd understand, My relation to another- ...

Simple, short. Good enough in my opinion. I wish it were a little more specific - it is VERY broad, and quite random in my opinion. I don't really see ...

One by one Your neighbors, classmates, friends, and family, And people who never saw you there Buckle their seat belts And close the door. As the oxygen And cheap light ...

I always knew you would be the one To catch me when I fall. As said above - cliche. You had me all along Wrapped around your finger. As said ...

I'm not sure what to make of this. It's a tragic story, told in a very light-hearted fashion. Also, you don't really use a lot of imagery...I mean that you're ...