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Re: Beautiful Disaster
Rip it to shreds? What?! This poem is beautiful! Why would I want to destroy it? ;____;. But, before I go on a feels coaster, here's the actual review: I ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: In the Midst of Darkness
Oh my D:. I think the meaning of this poem is that the narrator is sunken deep into depression, so much that she kills herself, hence the darkness 'calling out' ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: fitting in to
For two sentences, this poem has a very dark meaning. It shows that the narrator has become so accustomed to the depressing feeling inside of them that they wear it ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: true friend
Cute poem, Smile. This seems like a personal poem, so I won't go into hardcore reviewing mode. Other than a few grammar/spelling errors, the only little thing that's a bit ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Nature
This poem is good. I do have a few problems with it, though. The deer are running even little Scout It seems like you ran out of rhymes and didn't ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Romance, RIP
Woah! This is a whole new look on romance. It REALLY gets rid of the whole 'perfect love' concept, and shows the reader that, realistically, not everything in love is ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Devastation in Tears
This poem really gets to me. It tells me that the narrator truly understands the feeling of depression, and wants comfort desperately. It's a beautiful yet miserable poem. I really ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Knife
:( Sad poem is sad. I liked this poem a lot, and I liked that you described the knife so well. Most just talk about how it cuts through the ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: [ FRAMED ]
I like how this poem captures the idea of how a human being's mind 'destroys' negative memories and 'frames' the good ones. I also like how you separated shivers on ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Regret
I like this poem! It's simple, but deep. However, there's something a little confusing about this poem. In the beginning, it's clear that the meaning is something like, "Lying will ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Hero
What a plot twist. Instead of the villain becoming a hero, It's the hero becoming a villain, soon bored of his super-good deeds. I love how you said this little ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Letters Have Letters
This story is described in great detail, and is nice, but... This story is worded very strangely. It seems to have strange wording to appear intelligent (no offense at all, ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Who Says Boys Can't Cry
Hi, fellow Danganronpa fangirl! This poem is so cutesy and realistic. I like how you picked a topic that's not really focused on; everybody focuses on girls when it comes ...
Dec 26, 2013 -
Re: Anastasia Loves You
this is truly amazing. "And after every command I grew to follow, She’d leave bruises on my thighs That read Anastasia Loves You And she will until you die" this ...
Dec 26, 2013
