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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: She deserves better

    Hey, crobbins here for a quick review! (Sorry it's gonna be so short)! First I just want to say how much this resonates with me. In such a short form, ...

    May 1, 2017
  • Other » Fantasy, Other Re: Only words

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! Happy Review Day!!! Wow, it's always nice to read a simple description piece like this. All of the detail you utilized in this piece ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: I'm bitter in a way.

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! I wanted to start out by saying I love the title! It really draws me in! Now onto the nit-picks! I did think that ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Name Carver.

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! I'm glad to be reviewing some classic poetry again! So, onto the nit-picks! I did find the transition between paragraph three and four was ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Supernatural Re: The Progeny: Chapter 44

    Hey, crobbins here for another review! So, I didn't find any spelling errors! I also thought the formatting was perfect. No flaws there. (I can't review plot development as I ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Counting On You

    Hey, crobbins here for another review! Glad to read more of your work! I loved your other piece I reviewed! So onto the nit-picks! I think the formatting was a ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The World Within

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! So I saw this under the new members tab in the Green Room! Welcome to YWS! It takes a lot of courage to put ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Atlas

    Hey, crobbins here for another review! So I saw this under the new members tab in the Green Room! Congratulations on joining YWS! It takes a lot of courage to ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Perspectives

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! So I saw this under the new members tab in the Green Room! Congratulations on joining YWS! It takes a lot of courage to ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Ugly Words

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! So, I saw this work under the new authors tab! Welcome!!! It takes a lot of courage to publish your work for others to ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: A Mother's Concern

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! First of all, I saw you are a new member here! Welcome! (By reading this you couldn't tell you were new, though ;) ). ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Satire, Culture Re: Angles and Normans, part 1

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! I was actually a little concerned until I read that this was satire. Then it all clicked! I liked this piece a lot! Now ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Children of the Pyramid: Chapter 2; A city of Faux Gold

    Hey, crobbins here for a review! I haven't read chapter one, so I cannot really review plot development, my apologies! Onto some nit-picks! I found that along the way, some ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Satire Re: Council Meeting 2/19/17 Secretary's Notes

    Hey, crobbins here for a quick review! So, I'm not caught up on your previous works (my bad) so I can't really speak about the plot development. My apologies! So, ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: 5:46pm/35mm

    Hey, crobbins here for a quick review! So, I love this piece! I can't find any spelling/grammar issues! Kudos! I have seen many pieces like this (format-wise). I think your ...

    Feb 26, 2017


In short, Mrs. Pontellier was beginning to realize her position in the universe as a human being, and to recognize her relations as an individual to the world within and about her.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening