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Re: She deserves better
Hey, crobbins here for a quick review! (Sorry it's gonna be so short)! First I just want to say how much this resonates with me. In such a short form, ...
May 1, 2017 -
Re: Only words
Hey, crobbins here for a review! Happy Review Day!!! Wow, it's always nice to read a simple description piece like this. All of the detail you utilized in this piece ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: I'm bitter in a way.
Hey, crobbins here for a review! I wanted to start out by saying I love the title! It really draws me in! Now onto the nit-picks! I did think that ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: The Name Carver.
Hey, crobbins here for a review! I'm glad to be reviewing some classic poetry again! So, onto the nit-picks! I did find the transition between paragraph three and four was ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 44
Hey, crobbins here for another review! So, I didn't find any spelling errors! I also thought the formatting was perfect. No flaws there. (I can't review plot development as I ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Counting On You
Hey, crobbins here for another review! Glad to read more of your work! I loved your other piece I reviewed! So onto the nit-picks! I think the formatting was a ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: The World Within
Hey, crobbins here for a review! So I saw this under the new members tab in the Green Room! Welcome to YWS! It takes a lot of courage to put ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Atlas
Hey, crobbins here for another review! So I saw this under the new members tab in the Green Room! Congratulations on joining YWS! It takes a lot of courage to ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Perspectives
Hey, crobbins here for a review! So I saw this under the new members tab in the Green Room! Congratulations on joining YWS! It takes a lot of courage to ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Ugly Words
Hey, crobbins here for a review! So, I saw this work under the new authors tab! Welcome!!! It takes a lot of courage to publish your work for others to ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: A Mother's Concern
Hey, crobbins here for a review! First of all, I saw you are a new member here! Welcome! (By reading this you couldn't tell you were new, though ;) ). ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Angles and Normans, part 1
Hey, crobbins here for a review! I was actually a little concerned until I read that this was satire. Then it all clicked! I liked this piece a lot! Now ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Children of the Pyramid: Chapter 2; A city of Faux Gold
Hey, crobbins here for a review! I haven't read chapter one, so I cannot really review plot development, my apologies! Onto some nit-picks! I found that along the way, some ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: Council Meeting 2/19/17 Secretary's Notes
Hey, crobbins here for a quick review! So, I'm not caught up on your previous works (my bad) so I can't really speak about the plot development. My apologies! So, ...
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: 5:46pm/35mm
Hey, crobbins here for a quick review! So, I love this piece! I can't find any spelling/grammar issues! Kudos! I have seen many pieces like this (format-wise). I think your ...
Feb 26, 2017
