crissymarx

Hello Vibe! i love the thought and feeling you put into this poem...but I have a few suggestions... First the tenses seemed a little odd at times. It's not that ...

I actually love this poem. Not only is it beautifully written, but it also has a beautiful meaning and understanding. I also love the subtle rhyme scheme and the vocabulary ...

You're definitely right about your fabulous ending. I love how you ended the poem and it actually really made me ponder the whole meaning of your poem. The only comment ...

Aww this is sweet! But watch your tenses! You have the tendency to put present and past in like every other line, but that's my only legit criticism. Otherwise, this ...

Oh boy do I feel you there. This poem is not cheesy! I actually quite enjoyed it. And I like that it truly comes straight from your heart. Yes, we've ...

Hi there! I don't think this poem is cheesy at all because I am a very similar poet to you. I focus my writing on thoughtful topics that usually inspire ...

I'm going to be honest...I literally died laughing. Like I legit started laughing and my sister looked at me like what the hell is wrong with you. Unlike other comments ...

This is beautiful and intelligent! I love the scenery you managed to plant in my brain. What I love the most about this poem was the innocence of it all. ...

Who ever knew 5 lines could hold so much thought, emotion and meaning? I was slightly confused with the rhyme scheme of this poem. In all honesty, rhyming lasts with ...

This is a wonderful poem. When I first saw the title I was all like, no way, this person is writing about a fairy tale concept. That's literally my favorite ...

This is literally great. I admit, I got confused around the middle of it as to what the poem was about. But then I remembered and I started laughing. Even ...

This is beautiful. I love the feeling this poem gives off to the reader. I do agree with the other comments. You do have to be cautious of your tenses ...