crissymarx

Hi there! Crissy Marx here to hopefully give a "long review"... First off...I like the concept of the poem a lot. I actually relate to this poem a lot because ...

Hi there! First off, I like your format of your poem. But I did have a few...problems with it. First off, I am an absolute SUCKER for telling it like ...

Hi there! I'm Crissy! First off, I would like to say wow, really good job. Your vocabulary use was spot on. I haven't read a poem in a while with ...

I really truly and honestly loved this poem. It has a great message and it really cheered me up because I'm going through a dilemma right now involving people judging ...

Hello there! I'm Crissy! Good job! I like the overall feel of the poem, that's for sure. And I like the rhyme scheme...and I like the format...actually, there's really nothing ...

Hi there! I'm Crissy! great job! This poem flowed really well and I absolutely love love LOVE your use of vocabulary. Very good vocab choice...I can't emphasize that enough. And ...

Hi there! I'm Crissy! First off, good job. But I do have a few suggestions... First, you should really capitalize your proper words like "I" more often. It just gets ...

Hi there! I'm Crissy. I really like this poem but I do have a few suggestions... First off, you forgot to capitalize a few of your proper words like "I" ...

Hi there! I'm crissy! Great job on your poem. I didn't think it was too short but I do have a few suggestions... First off, watch your apostrophes. On many ...

Ok...this made me laugh so hard. I absolutely loved it! First off, the title absolutely made me click on it right away. I mean...how could you pass up on a ...

Hi there! You asked me to review so here I am! (keep asking I'll always agree) Good job! I liked your format very was sort of different and it wasn't ...

This is so cute! I read your other one too, by the way, and I do like this one better. The only comments I would really have to make are ...

Hi there! Don't worry, I am not about to beat you up :). For your first poem (ever?) this is very good. You had way above average vocabulary and an ...

I really really like this a lot. Great job! It's a very simple message but you delivered it wonderfully. I especially love your use of rhymes. Like a comment below ...

First off, sorry for what's been going on in your life with this jerk in your poem. Now to the review... I really like it. It pores your heart out ...