hi i i'm here to drop a review off on what i read
First i had to get a laugh out on for reading this when you said I wonder which journey you made
to end up on a coffee cup.
I wonder how you survive behind the caffeine
sea. i i'm like lol this was so funny i couldn't believe it how the poem was saying about some McDonald's and yeah i love me some Starbucks and yeah i can't say much cause its to short for someone to read
How you can improve is on writing and thinking of more things then just like one line in to your poem you suppose to think what you see or what's going in your life or it can be a person or somebody
My compliment is where did you get Starbucks from and McDonald's anyway did you write what you see or something i wanna know whats going on what makes you wanna to write something like this its awesome keep it up but next time just write more than one line through
Keep writing!
~jay~
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