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Re: Morning Miracle
Wow! This poem was very relaxing and detailed to read.I loved reading it.This was romantic,you can feel the emotions coming from the words in the poem.The fact that the narrator ...
Jan 24, 2022 -
Re: Chase of the Untamed Maiden
Oooh…I might actually listen to the song one day.This story gave off wonderful fairytale vibes! I loved reading it,it was very nice.I’d love it if you continued this and made ...
Jan 23, 2022 -
Re: why am i the moon
Oooh..I loved reading this poem.It’s very romantic and sad.This person feels lost and alone…like they can’t be someone else’s light,no matter how hard they try.They can never be someone elseâ€
Jan 22, 2022 -
Re: Him
Sometimes when you really get to know each other,you end up not wanting to be with the other person.You feel like your love has grown apart.Like it has gone stale.I ...
Jan 21, 2022 -
Re: City Lights
Ah yes,when we first see the city lights,we think they are stars.But they are just lights.Often,our imagination gets interrupted by science.It’d be nice if the lights really were stars.Then it’d ...
Jan 20, 2022 -
Re: Far away
This is a nice and detailed poem you made here.This actually reminds me of some characters I made,which is pretty cool.I think we all lose that one special person in ...
Jan 19, 2022 -
Re: What lies in the emptiness above the sky?
I love this interpretation of outer space you two made.It’s got beautiful imagery and describes the wonders of space as well.Space is a vast and limitless void.We admire it and ...
Jan 18, 2022 -
Re: Doomed Insurgent - Sestina
What a dark and detailed poem! The words and descriptions you used were very detailed and I could really picture it in my mind.Being completely helpless and forced into the ...
Jan 17, 2022 -
Re: Out of Sight
Ooh..this sounds like it could be part of a story.I think it’s about not being emotionally ready for the truth,about being unprepared for what is to come.I liked the descriptions ...
Jan 16, 2022 -
Re: It Hurts :)
Oof..I can relate to this poem.I had a friend for years and she just drifted off and really hurt..Overall,this poem was relatable and well-written.Trust me,you’ll meet new and better people,who ...
Jan 15, 2022 -
Re: The Burden Bearer
This poem sounds like it’s connected to a very interesting story.I liked reading this short and fun poem you made.I thought that you described this character in the poem very ...
Jan 15, 2022 -
Re: They answer my questions with confident lies
This is actually a very cool and unique poem.I think this poem could be about people who already have answers in their head that they don’t even think about.They just ...
Jan 13, 2022 -
Re: Tired
This was very descriptive and detailed.How you talk about being afraid to fall asleep,because of these cascading thoughts.All I have to say for that is to breathe and relax when ...
Jan 12, 2022 -
Re: Poetry Compilation #1
I liked all three of the poems.They were descriptive and had lovely imagery.They all had their own charm and imagery to them.I think my favorite poem was the second had ...
Jan 12, 2022 -
Re: Explaining Emetophobia
I liked this poem.The way you wrote it brings a sense of fear in the poem.Like we’re you,the author,experiencing your phobias.Yes,I do agree that a phobia is much more than ...
Jan 10, 2022
