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  • Poetry » General, Other Re: My invisible mask

    We hide our emotions from others,in fear of what will happen.But if we just talk about our feelings or write them down,we’ll feel better.Any of the two is helpful,as long ...

    Feb 8, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: To The Ever-Dishevelled Maid of the Eternal Mist

    I think the poem is pretty good for a first this your first time? I don’t want to assume or anything.But yes,the poem does have a rhyme kinda flow to ...

    Feb 7, 2022
  • Poetry » Literature, Narrative Re: fool's gold and false gods.

    Yes,when we are below people,we get labeled as the “crazy” or “weird” least,that’s what I think part of the poem is about.I also believe it is about someone who has ...

    Feb 6, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Purple Instructions

    So,what happens next? I guess that’s left to our imagination.I wonder if the flower has any significance in the story.Does it symbolize greed? Desire? Or perhaps,reality just out of reach,in ...

    Feb 5, 2022
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Carlo

    This was a fun short story to read about a disruptive seems like he doesn’t care for what the adults have to say.The only thing that’s got his attention is ...

    Feb 4, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: no (mirror lies) between us

    I have enjoyed reading this poem.It’s about love and how connected people feel with each other,that they’d do anything for each other.They’d wish for their very love to never,ever end.Alas,not ...

    Feb 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Conversions

    Very thoughtful and poetic! Yes,this is true.Change is inevitable,no one can avoid matter how hard we try,we cannot escape will follow us through the end of time,the ancient trees know ...

    Feb 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: love

    I liked reading this poem about was real and beautiful.There isn’t just one person for us,there could be other people waiting to meet us.We don’t ever have to meet other ...

    Feb 1, 2022
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: ​a raging sea

    I loved the descriptions you put in the really does create beautiful imagery.I love how you described how the narrator was fooled by this person and how they plan to ...

    Jan 31, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Bella, Horida Bella

    This was fun to read.It’s so detailed and has lovely a few short lines,you described the effect wars have on people.And often,we’d ask ourselves:”What is the point of winning a ...

    Jan 30, 2022
  • Poetry » Humor, Culture Re: 'Writer' Limericks

    Ooh…those were fun limericks to read.Yes,I do relate to some of these.I could have an idea and find out that it’s already been done.It’s frustrated and annoying,but then,I can come ...

    Jan 29, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: You don't trust me...

    We all have someone who still has stuff going on,who doesn’t feel comfortable talking to others,even if you know them hurts,but it’s true.Maybe they’ll talk one day.If not,speak to someone ...

    Jan 28, 2022
  • Art » Dramatic, Literature Re: when henry was found

    This was a sad and emotional poem.The person who is dead,who is this person? The child’s father? If so,this makes the poem much more sadder.Who is Henry? Does the name ...

    Jan 27, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Perfect is Imperfect

    Oh,cool poem! I actually watched Encanto and I loved it! This is nice and true.I feel like most people have felt like Mirabel,wondering if it were better to be someone ...

    Jan 26, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: whiplash // i hope i live forever

    I liked reading this poem,it was very dramatic and detailed to read.I believe it’s about losing yourself to ideas.It’s about losing yourself into ideas and being gone into darkness,being reduced ...

    Jan 25, 2022


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