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Stupid puzzle

by LostWriter


Whatever you do to me, I bear it in silence,

I think maybe it's your way of guidance

Whatever you tell me, I tolerate it enough,

I think maybe, you will balance it with your love.

But long do I wait and wait and wait,

And think maybe, your love is not in my fate.

My love, what is this stupid puzzle?

Can I ever deny the way you love me?

Can I ever deny the way you care for me?

Can I ever deny the way you make me happy?

Can I ever deny the same way you make me cry?

The answer is simply, no,

You always hit me hard with your love's Arrow and bow,

Still many questions are waiting in rows

My love, what is this stupid puzzle?

Little did I know how you're the one getting hurt after hurting me,

Little did I know, by making me cry you cannot smile in Glee,

Little did I know, you never hurt me purposely,

Little did I know, you never want to let go of me.

Then why do you do this? You yourself have no answer,

After hurting me, you're the one carrying all the pressure.

My love, what is this stupid puzzle?

Nobody makes me smile like you,

Nobody makes me cry like you,

Nobody ever loved me like you,

Nobody ever cared for me like you.

You're just so precious, I can never let go of you,

You are indeed the love of my life and I love you.

But at the end it is fixed,

Love is indeed a stupid puzzle


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Tue Mar 08, 2022 2:40 pm
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Kelisot wrote a review...



Hello, this is Kelisot just doing another review!
Ah yes, love. Poetry about love always manages to be interesting for me. I enjoyed reading this poem, as the title itself caught my interest. Calling love a "stupid puzzle" is an interesting thing-- I highly agree with your narration and opinions in the poem. Sometimes, love is like the wind, we can't see it, yet it's visible. And mostly, chasing for love is like grasping smoke, formless, fading away.

I especially liked one of your view lines from here:

But long do I wait and wait and wait,

And think maybe, your love is not in my fate.

My love, what is this stupid puzzle?

These lines gave some impact when I read, I could see that the narrator here is in a state of sadness, perhaps because the "beloved one" does not go well together. Despite loving, the tragedy of two lovers, who knows the bitter future fate has for them-- yet they still love. It may have just been me, but these lines stuck out to me, perhaps because I could understand it?
Nobody makes me smile like you,

Nobody makes me cry like you,

Nobody ever loved me like you,

Nobody ever cared for me like you.


This poetry, in conclusion, gave an impacting lesson about love. If one hangs themself upside down, they're going to see the world upside-down. If you flip a coin, there always is a chance you will see a different side of the coin you probably have never seen. Everything in this world is like this-- in the end, several concepts humanity has created are in vain and futile.
However, the message is telling us that despite the vanity and worthless meaning of everything, we should still enjoy every moment of our lives. Be happy with everyone, despite the future! Everything may seem meritless, but if we live on this Materialistic Realm, then we have the right to enjoy such vanity. Thank you for posting this poetry, and I hope you have a great day!




LostWriter says...


Hello Kelisot!
Thank you very much for taking out some of your precious time to write this review! :D
I really appreciate how you actually understood what I was trying to make the readers understand. Hope you have a great day/ night too <3



LostWriter says...


Lol I'm stupid, I didn't see it's a comment and not a review, please excuse my stupidity :-!



Kelisot says...


It's a review...?



LostWriter says...


:-* why am I stupid...Im so sorry for the confusion(TT)



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Ah yes,love is far from perfect.Often you’ll feel like you have each other,but you’re still together.Such are the things that happen with romance.This poem is wholesome,dark and funny at the same time.Not funny like hilarious,funny like dark humor.I wonder if this will become a story..it’d be interesting if it did.I hope you have an amazing and lovely day and night.




LostWriter says...


Hello vampricon! Thank you for the review!
I'll definitely try to put your idea into work :D




I write because I don't know what I think until I read what I say.
— Flannery O'Connor