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Re: The Things You See
We all see so much more in the littlest of things.That’s what happens when you’ve got a kind heart and a vivid imagination.I loved the descriptions in the poem,it really ...
Mar 10, 2022 -
Re: hell is found in the children's section of the library
I don’t know if you’re a librarian or if you like putting books in their places,but boy,this sounds stressful! Children running around and touching things with their gross snot,unruly and ...
Mar 9, 2022 -
Re: Cosmic Travel
This was quite the descriptive poem! When I read it,I got an image of glimmering stars and infinite galaxies in my mind.I think that this poem is about people becoming ...
Mar 8, 2022 -
Re: betrayal
If this is based on something that actually happened to you,then I’m so sorry that it did! I know how that feels.A good friend of mine started ignoring me and ...
Mar 7, 2022 -
Re: Void
The person the narrator is describing is someone who lights up their life in a way no one else has,in a way no one ever has.It’s more than hard to ...
Mar 6, 2022 -
Re: Stupid puzzle
Ah yes,love is far from perfect.Often you’ll feel like you have each other,but you’re still together.Such are the things that happen with romance.This poem is wholesome,dark and funny at the ...
Mar 5, 2022 -
Re: winged-sandals (and a weight not worth lifting)
This is a lovely poem about the Greek myth of Atlas carrying the world.I’m familiar with the myth.People force others to carry the weight of the world when they themselves ...
Mar 4, 2022 -
Re: Coffee Bar
Ah,when we can’t have our morning cup of coffee.It’s not being dramatic,it’s the truth.Coffee is love,coffee is life.The poem itself was short,but it was sucks when you can’t have what ...
Mar 3, 2022 -
Re: crimson nymph
My thoughts on this poem? I believe it has multiple could be about a fae creature who looks at humans poorly.The crimson nymph is telling us how they view hairless ...
Mar 2, 2022 -
Re: The Little Mermaid
I love that she didn’t get put down! I’d probably throw a tantrum lol,but that’s just my opinion,if you practice enough and are passionate about it,then you do get the ...
Mar 1, 2022 -
Re: The Chicken of the End
Oh wow,this was hilarious! Is this literally about a killer chicken or is it just about how annoying chickens are? Because if this is about a Halloween slasher chicken,I’m not ...
Feb 28, 2022 -
Re: An English Rose
I think that this poem is about people only seeing your physical beauty and taking advantage of that,using everything that is beautiful for their own gain until there is nothing ...
Feb 27, 2022 -
Re: The Ants Build a New Chamber
This is a cute poem about ants coming together to build a brand new chamber.The story behind the poem seems interesting,too.Are the greenhouses different dimensions that they are in? Could ...
Feb 26, 2022 -
Re: Fire Alarm
Ah yes,fire alarms were created to help us,yet they do more harm than good,with their screeching noises annoying us out of our perfect calmness.I have to say,this poem was hilarious! ...
Feb 25, 2022 -
Re: Dusk is in these lights.
A detailed poem about when dusk crosses! The night does have a certain mystery to it,I do agree with that.But I wonder,does the blush and strawberry work well with this ...
Feb 24, 2022
