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Re: Paradise
No one stops to think that maybe the woman doesn’t want the baby.Or that the baby didn’t come from love.Or that the person carrying the baby wasn’t a woman but ...
Jun 14, 2022 -
Re: Words With Friends (2) Bots
The curse of not finding worthy opponents! Never being able to earn a win day in and day out.The same thing.Will there ever be a time the challenge is done ...
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Re: Rote Learning
We find comfort in the chaos.We won’t be blamed for causing it.If we are in the red then we can just come up with excuses.This makes me think it is ...
Jun 12, 2022 -
Re: The Body On the Ceiling
This is like a well written Creepypasta! Is this supposed to be a Creepypasta? Do you know what a Creepypasta is? It’s anything disturbing on the internet from stories like ...
Jun 11, 2022 -
Re: O dear Hotels, stop being ironic!
Please! This is just too true! They promise all these nice things and end up bringing the opposite.I like hotels because they bring off the feeling of being on vacation.I ...
Jun 10, 2022 -
Re: Make Me
Whatever happened to their love? What tragic twist crept towards them? How could this be? That is for us readers to interpret.I think that this makes sense.It’s about wanting to ...
Jun 9, 2022 -
Re: deep breathing exercises
And you are always beautiful like the cracked and colorless photo of a 1950’s dame.Old,timeless and everlasting.Sorry I just wanted to add to the prose.I can imagine this as either ...
Jun 8, 2022 -
Re: Wooden Comb
And I wonder if a girl with long golden hair overlooking a mirror lake ever used that comb.Maybe she had porcelain dolls.Maybe the girl dreamed with her comb.Who knew? That ...
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Re: Fallen Angel
Ah the fear of exploring and finding yourself.The fear of really letting who you are come into place.Drowning in your sorrow and consumes and destroys takes over you.It’s unescapable.It’s everywhe
Jun 6, 2022 -
Re: Lora and Julia
I like this story because it reminds me of something I would write.Hey,maybe if you want to,I could pick one of my characters to meet one of the characters in ...
Jun 5, 2022 -
Re: so much for my happy ending
Well that was dark.I think it’s about someone who just can’t take the bullying anymore and just snaps.It’s too late to apologize now.The gun is already pointed and filled.The hate ...
Jun 4, 2022 -
Re: The Little Cow and the Great Titan
Those who suffer punishments from the Gods are stronger than them.Because they take risks.Because they dare.Even with the many consequences they still try.I don’t really like Zeus either.I find him ...
Jun 3, 2022 -
Re: Book Stabber!!
A friend who has destroyed your collection of books is no friend.Especially after sending it off to space.This story made cry and question the meaning of made me look behind ...
Jun 2, 2022 -
Re: I will not be Bad
I don’t see how writing on a board can stop someone from being bad.But that’s what teachers did.It’s what people have thought to do.A kid is going to misbehave.They are ...
Jun 1, 2022 -
Re: Night time Fears
Often at night things seem scarier.It’s like the world is out to get reality it’s all in your head.But we can’t help it when we imagine these things.It’s night so ...
May 31, 2022
