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Re: Numbscullery
It seems as though this starts as a deathly poem and ends as a dreamy one.Were the lower case letters intentional? What was the theme of this poem? Is there ...
Aug 13, 2022 -
Re: The kings eldest child, prologue
Quite interesting! I feel like they will suffer the fate of all royal families and come crashing down.The family will kill and burn each other.A legacy drenched in blood and ...
Aug 12, 2022 -
Re: Haiku Sequence [Library, Painted stone and Bougainvillea]
Each individual haiku you wrote holds its own special story.The library holds books and adventures of all kind.The painted stone is art amongst the green gracefully growing on it.Finally,we have ...
Aug 12, 2022 -
Re: The Wounds of Love
Love is beautiful.But as beautiful as it is,it hurts like a gaping wound.When the one you love disappears from your grasp forever.Forever in your heart,yet no longer yours to love.Just..gone.I ...
Aug 11, 2022 -
Re: The moon witch- 1&2 + extra
I will guess the context.Selene lives in a magical kingdom where people have different colored skin and hair,Gods and talking animals exist, and men like Selene have feminine names.Selene and ...
Aug 9, 2022 -
Re: An Almost-Sonnet: Table for Two
I have a feeling that this other individual just wants to eat.They don’t want to take the time to actually savor it.I don’t feel like that agreement was genuine-I feel ...
Aug 8, 2022 -
Re: Writers block Piece?? I have no title :')
Wow! I didn’t expect that twist! What ever happened to Myria’s dear mother? I believe the title should be “Familiar Faces” because one would know who their mother is, but ...
Aug 7, 2022 -
Re: The Sky-Whale
The beach air welcomes us.The salty wind tosses our hair into funny curls.And the whale emerges, majestic and glorious.This was a lovely poem! I could smell the air of the ...
Aug 7, 2022 -
Re: I wish
We wish love were as easy and right as it is so often written and imagined.Some things are to be kept.Some are to be let go.We aren’t responsible for our ...
Aug 5, 2022 -
Re: The Blooming Blue Iris
I haven’t read the manga so I’m a little confused, but I enjoyed the poem nonetheless.I sense that this is a love poem.Not the kind that is ethereal and bright, ...
Aug 5, 2022 -
Re: Elias
To answer your question,I think this takes place in the 80s because you mention bright hoodies,streetlights,and for the type of person Elias is,I get the feeling that he is nihilistic ...
Aug 3, 2022 -
Re: Snake Poem
Nice rhythm poem! Like a snake.I don’t fear snakes lol.I have characters based on them.But thanks for the warning :D. I wonder what song it’s based on.When I first read ...
Aug 2, 2022 -
Re: The Evolution of Disney Princesses
Wow! Those were some interesting facts about the Disney Princesses.I didn’t know Aurora was more forgotten.Growing up,Aurora was my favorite Disney Princess because she wore pink.I used to hate Tian
Aug 1, 2022 -
Re: My Lover Chapter One: The Encounter
This is an interesting love story! I can’t wait for more.What will Qiangwei do next? Guess I’ll have to find out.Just a few questions:Is his name Mingjun or Kaiwei? Does ...
Jul 31, 2022 -
Re: If the entire sun burned out of the sky (when) would you know?
Is there a way I’m supposed to read this or is it fine any way? I wonder if the end of the poem has different meanings if started differently.I like ...
Jul 30, 2022
