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Re: Memento Mori
Whoa..cool story. I wonder what happened to make Sarah insane. Hopefully she gets better, but I doubt that she will. As for Nehemiah and Patrick, I feel like their relationship ...
Dec 24, 2022 -
Re: A Dangerous World (Chapter 3)
I doubt that Abaddon is lying about his name, but you never know with these characters. Abaddon kind of sounds like “abandon”. I don’t know if that was done on ...
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Re: The peace letting go of me
The mood of the story for me is a dark fairytale. It gives me “Alice in Wonderland” vibes. Now, it did feel loose a bit, but that’s a good thing, ...
Dec 22, 2022 -
Re: Just Me and My Friend [short story]
This is a really cute short story! I like how they stay friends even after one of them lost their mole. The one true friend stayed with him. I feel ...
Dec 21, 2022 -
Re: A Dangerous World (Chapter 2)
I wonder, why did Layla’s parents fear her? Sure, she is peculiar, but she didn’t do anything bad. At least, not that I know of. I liked the continuation! Now ...
Dec 20, 2022 -
Re: A Dangerous World
I wonder what will become of Layla and this man. She wanders the streets and it’s just her luck to meet a demon in the streets. I don’t know if ...
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Re: Guardian Time
It seems to be about understanding someone no one else understands. I like the way this poem was written! It’s like the person being mentioned is the sunlight streaming in ...
Dec 18, 2022 -
Re: Warren Paranormal Investigators: The Curse of the Wendigo Island.
Yay! They all stopped the Wendigo! This wouldn’t be an easy task, considering how strong Wendigos are. But it seems like these people know what they’re doing! And they gained ...
Dec 17, 2022 -
Re: Our Tune
It’s sad, but true. One must grow from the sorrow to live for the present. If nothing was done, Kaylah would have had a hard life. She probably would have ...
Dec 16, 2022 -
Re: The Noble Princess and The Warrior Chicken
How simply riveting! We all need a warrior chicken to save us! The majestic feathers and the beautiful clucking would sweep any Princess off her feet! I’d say that this ...
Dec 15, 2022 -
Re: Little Red Bloody Hood | Chapter Three - A Den of Wolves
Is it bad that it’s only chapter three and I already ship Edith with Maiken? I just think that Maiken sounds really interesting and I would love to see their ...
Dec 14, 2022 -
Re: Little Red Bloody Hood | Chapter Two - Just her and Her Thoughts
Whoa! She’s far out into the woods now. And she entered a den of wolves! Hopefully all will be well. My favorite part in the story was the rain drops. ...
Dec 13, 2022 -
Re: Little Red Bloody Hood | Chapter One - Into the Woods
Ooh I love dark fairytales and this is just *chef’s kiss* beautiful! I like Edith already. She seems like a kind person, but also someone who will do what needs ...
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Re: this is why we fight
The narrator is fighting for change. Blood runs down their face. A quick wipe and they’re back in. Back in the fight. Ready to fight for what is right. It ...
Dec 11, 2022 -
Re: Eternity and a Day
Beautiful and a bit creepy. I got a better idea of what this story was about as I read further along. Will Soham find peace? Will he be born, in ...
Dec 10, 2022
