Hey @Thediffident here to give you a review on your wonderful piece!
This was truly a sweet yet sad read. The way you described your thoughts via this piece made me feel connected and somewhat personally linked to it as well. Not a lot of writers are capable of making the readers feel a personal connection to a piece. The way you were able to accomplish that is truly incredible!
Furthermore, the metaphors you used in this poem contributed a lot in making this piece come alive. It gave new insights and it was so thrilling to read every new metaphor you came up with.
The title of the poem is truly amazing. It gives a jist of the piece and that too in a few simple words. It's captivating as well and is one of the main reasons I decided to review this piece. Bravo!
Your writing style was great! The language was clear and concise and I couldn't find any grammatical mistakes here as well. I loved the font you used in the poem. It gave a mesmerizing and great touch to your piece.
Overall, this piece was truly phenomenal. Consider me a fan of your work! I hope you liked the review <3