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Re: LC Excerpt 3 part 2
At least there is some progress being made in the war. It seems to be getting harder and harder with each chapter. I’ll check the last part to see what ...
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Re: LC Excerpt 3 part 1
From what I read, it seems like the character fought and pushed on for those that they cared about. Maybe the war isn’t over, but it will end one day. ...
Jun 3, 2023 -
Re: LC excerpt 2 part 1
These are the same characters from the last story I read. It seems that the main character grew after some time. That woman really changed his life for the better. ...
Jun 2, 2023 -
Re: LC Excerpt 2 Part 2
I hope that the character is able to escape with his love. Judging from what I read, he might do more than escape. He might end Victor. He did weaken ...
Jun 1, 2023 -
Re: LC excerpt 1
This story was so sad and emotional. It was well-written, too. I felt hopeful in the moments where the guy believed in her and defeated when he left her. She ...
May 31, 2023 -
Re: All of the City Lights
This story was just so beautiful. It felt as though Emma was being awakened by the beauty of the world around her. I wonder if Andrea and Emma will ever ...
May 31, 2023 -
Re: Prologue - the day we met
Ciel is back! Will Ciel remember Michael? It had been years since they had seen each other. Hopefully Ciel will remember him. If not, it will be like the day ...
May 29, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 10
Ryan seems a bit testy, but she probably has her reasons. I wonder if Ryan will love Yagi the same way he feels about her. I’ll have to see. I ...
May 28, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 9
So now Sako is a fully fledged demon. I like that Victor is going to help him, that’s nice. It’s sad that Yagi is afraid of Sako. Victor will help ...
May 28, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 8
Interesting facts about demons and angels. Demons drink angel blood? Maybe Yagi could give Sako just a little bit of his blood…if he wanted to. Angels have wings, but demons ...
May 26, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 7
The doctor just drugged Yagi?! Probably so he could go to sleep. If it’s anything bad, then… Yagi should have never trusted the doctor. Or maybe the doctor is finally ...
May 25, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 6
Yagi didn’t choose to be an angel, just like Sako didn’t choose to be a demon. Yagi didn’t want to make Sako sick, he cares about him. This is kind ...
May 24, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 5
Oh man…it’s just what I thought. Sako is a demon and Yagi is an angel. But this practice…I didn’t see that one coming. Maybe they’re all dying because of their ...
May 23, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 4
I think that Sako is turning into something else. Either his full hybrid form or a demon form. If his full hybrid form, then maybe the situation he’s in caused ...
May 22, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 3
Sako isn’t dead, I don’t think. But he’s struggling. And this new guy sounds like bad news. I sure do hope that Sako doesn’t get taken away from Yagi. There ...
May 21, 2023
