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To answer your questions: Jay’s conclusions are explained well, the city seems very haunting, and the details are enough. Being in the city he was as The Ghost will challenge ...

Oh man…things are not looking good. I’m unsure on whether Elijah should be trusted. For her own safety, Annabel should just trust herself. Maybe she could bring someone with her ...

That ending was epic! My favorite part was when Hannah fought Beau. I also liked that you included the biblically accurate angels, The Thrones. Not too many people describe angels ...

Poor Victor…he was so hopeful about escaping. Why did Elijah have terror in his eyes? If he actually feels bad for the children, he’d do something to help them. But ...

Beautifully written and tragic. Why would Annabel and the other children be locked away from their families? What kind of monsters would do that to a group of children? I’ll ...

I think that the hallucination is a good addition to the story. It’s not distracting. I think that the chapter leading up to the news about Cupid doesn’t need any ...

It is quite eerie how we know more about Space than the ocean. The ocean is here, on Earth. Space is far away and yet… I think that the midnight ...

That’s so cute! :) I like how the narrator sees the celebrity crush as someone who will bring them happiness through music, as a fond memory to have. It’s always ...

Cooper was able to fight the Demigods, but now Cooper is all alone. On top of that, he broke into a million pieces. He could get teleported to somewhere else, ...

The implants rejected Cooper once, but they won’t reject him again. Or will they? Probably not. He is the supposed Bone God, so he might be fine. Or because he’s ...

Cooper is the Bone God? It hasn’t been confirmed yet, but from what I read, I believe that Cooper is the missing Bone God, reborn as a human. Zach might ...

There’s a new character talking in this chapter. I wonder if the POVS will keep changing. There seems to be more with being a God than Cooper and the other ...

So humanity is all gone and cyborgs are the only sources of life left? Interesting. I feel like Cooper was either a warrior, a warlord, or a general in his ...

Jay and his Dad’s conversation seems realistic to me. The detail of Jay’s arrows forming a person is well done, showing how much his time as Ghost affected him. It’s ...

The cozy vibes of the house and the unsettling vibes of the basement don’t feel too fast. A home gives comfort and a basement is prison. Jay’s hesitance to not ...