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Re: Bible verse
Greetings! Corgi here with a review! I love this lyric and it really tugs at my heart strings. Though i am not religious, i can relate to this, and it ...
Sep 27, 2017 -
Re: I Still Believe
Greetings! Corgi here for a review! This poem is very interesting and i got my own interpretation from it. I'm not sure if this is the meaning of it that ...
Sep 27, 2017 -
Re: Warriors: Rise - Allegiances and Prologue
Greetings! Corgi here for a review! Now I absolutely LOVE the Warrior Cats series by Erin Hunter!! When I saw this, I was like "Oh my god i have to ...
Sep 27, 2017 -
Re: The Legacy of Hope
Hello! Corgi here with a review! Now, i loved this poem. This poem is very inspiring and is beautiful. With all the chaos that has been happening in the world ...
Aug 1, 2016 -
Re: summer in ohio
O-H-I-O! Not only did the title catch my attention, but the minute i saw this poem, I was like Whoa! This is a very creative poem! The set up of ...
Aug 1, 2016 -
Re: Disabilities, no need to compare
Hi! Its Corgi here with a review! I loved this poem! I see people all the time staring at disabled people, and i think this poem describes exactly what the ...
Jun 17, 2016 -
Re: flying out of a cannon is the best feeling
Ok, first off, the title got me interested in this short story. Great choice of words! It immediately grabbed my attention! The short story itself was just as interesting! This ...
Jun 17, 2016 -
Re: Chicago, Nebraska, Orlando
I can tell this is heart felt. Not that many people on here are writing about the shooting, I am trying to but i am just so sad and shocked. ...
Jun 14, 2016 -
Re: When in Doubt, always choose 'C.'
Wow! This is very creative! I feel that this is very relatable , especially for a teenager such as myself. I love how you made this poem look like a ...
Jun 13, 2016 -
Re: Summer (Mr. Sun)
This was a very positive and happy poem! You did a very good job! I didn't see any grammatical errors, and it seemed to have a pretty good rhythm except ...
Jun 12, 2016 -
Re: An Essay on Society (from the perspective of a cat)
This was a very interesting piece of literature! You did a good job, i didn't see any spelling errors ( Considering your pretty much using the exact same word lol!) ...
Jun 12, 2016 -
Re: Distress in a White Dress
Hello!! Let me just throw this out there real quick. LOVED IT!!! It was so creative and humorous! I only saw a few things i didn't like. "The thought today ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: True Colors
Wow, this is a very deep poem. I can sure tell you put a lot of thought into it. I like how you worded everything, it really gave the poem ...
Jan 14, 2015 -
Re: His Beautiful Lies
Nice poem! This gives a good description of heart break indeed. I saw few mistakes except for one. You misspelled heart and said hear instead. It is a simple mistake ...
Sep 21, 2014 -
Re: Unblocking the writer's block
Oh my gosh this was great advice! I was laughing out loud, ask my friend Em101cats because I was on Skype with her when I read this! My absolute favorite ...
Sep 6, 2014
