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Hello there! I know that you don't particularly like us reviewers pointing out your grammatical errors, but they really need to be fixed. They're too glaringly obvious and sloppy, for ...

Hello there, and happy review day! I love the positive tone of this piece. It really speaks of determination and strength. Bridget is obviously a very strong character. However, I ...

Hello there, and happy review day! Hmmm, let's see. I think that some of your description could have been a bit better. The seventh stanza, for example, is pretty straightforward ...

Hello there, fellow Sherlockian, and happy review day! Let's start with what I liked. Even though I don't really ship Johnlock too much (just a little bit), I think that ...

Hello again, fellow Whovian! Happy review day! Yay, Doctor Who poetry! I don't see much poetic fanfiction, so I read it whenever I get the chance. I see this as ...

Hello there, and happy review day! So, I realize that you wrote this a long time ago, but I still think that you could edit it. Just because it's old ...

Hello there, and happy review day! Wow, this is a really good poem! The first stanza was so perfectly worded and structured. It's very poetic and short, yet full of ...

Hello there, and happy review day. Jeez. It's natural for me to be crying over a poem based off of a TV show, isn't it? Because guess what your poem ...

Hello there, and happy review day! This is a really... true poem. Society does change us, and you've really portrayed that well. I like how it tells us the past ...

Hello there, and happy review day! I'm going to try to write a review for this, but since this poem is so good, I don't know what to say. Let's ...

Hello there, and happy review day! Oh my gosh. This was chilling. It was a wonderfully creepy twist on Mother's Day. I'm not sure I'll ever look at it the ...

Hello there, and happy review day! I think that JohnLocke1 pretty much covered all the grammatical nitpicks, so I'll review content. Wow, this seems like a pretty suspenseful opening! The ...

Hello there, and happy review day! I disagree with Lumi. I think that your use of repetition in every stanza fits the style of the poem, and keeps it consistent, ...

Hello there, and happy review day! Since the previous reviewers have already pointed out all of the grammatical errors, I'll be reviewing content. I like how this piece explores the ...

Hello there, and happy review day! Wow, this really portrayed a very descriptive and realistic dystopian society. And better yet... it's a poem! I've seen all kinds of dystopian novels ...