'I stood there shaking,breaking.' - you missed the space after the comma.
'mrs. Hutson' - This should be a capital 'M' and it's 'Hudson'.
'I'm nothing with out you.' - 'without' is one word.
First of all, I would just like to say: I was at a Q&A with Rainbow Rowell (new york times bestseller) and she said Johnlock was her OTP and that it's cannon.
Anyway, ow this hurt so much! I got so furious at Sherlock for not taking John's feelings into account when he ... did the thing. Let's not mention that. I like the last line because it reminds me of John's limp before he met Sherlock and how Sherlock filled a big gap in his life.
I would have liked a mention of Mary but if this is before he met her, then that's fair enough.
Well done!
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