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Re: Where I'm From
Hey, Elysium (finally spelled that right)! cleverclogs here to save you from the Green Room! I'm from the bell of my trumpet and the tip of my paintbrush. I like ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: My plot idea- Advice would be appreciated
Hey there! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! My first word of advice: I think that this would probably be better off as a forum post or a blog ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Light and Dark
Hey-o, ChocolateCello! cleverclogs here for an almost-review-day review! :P makes it hard to be mislead "Mislead" should be "misled". No big deal. Also, the punctuation is bothering me. You usually ...
Aug 29, 2015 -
Re: More Than That
Hey, CardinalSouth! cleverclogs here to review! Does he feel the way like I do? This line doesn't make sense. Try replacing "like" with "that". This is no typical crush Ohhh ...
Aug 16, 2015 -
Re: School
Yo, ChocolateCello! cleverclogs here to review! This will probably be a rather short review, since this is a short poem. :) This is funny and cute. A few suggestions: 1. ...
Aug 15, 2015 -
Re: Dear Freshman
Hello there, hermione315! cleverclogs here to review your lovely poem! As a rising freshman, I needed this. Normally, the transition from middle to high school wouldn't be a big deal ...
Aug 14, 2015 -
Re: Song For A Delaware Winter
Yo, mkultra98! cleverclogs here to review! I really like this, but, like the previous reviewer, I don't really understand it. It's like that one song that you love, but you ...
Aug 12, 2015 -
Re: A Repeating Repetitive Poem about Repeated Repetitiveness
Yo, Catlover211! cleverclogs here for a quick review! This is hilarious. I love the repetitive repetition of repetitiveness. As I said in my post below, it reminds of me of ...
Aug 11, 2015 -
Re: House of Haiku #2
Yo, Mysticalxx. cleverclogs here to review! Let's roll. The first thing I'll do is link you to a review that will link you to two wonderful haiku resources (link-ception!). The ...
Aug 9, 2015 -
Re: Childhood Poetry
Hi there, Mysticalxx! cleverclogs here to review! Since there are two different poems here, I'll split my review into two separate sections. Thoughts on "Rainbow" This was my favorite of ...
Aug 9, 2015 -
Re: I'm Melting...
Hi again, Catlover211! cleverclogs here to review! I was totally going to review this for the July Review Day, but for whatever reason I was like, "nah, nevermind" and walked ...
Aug 9, 2015 -
Re: Cat
Hi there, Mysticalxx! cleverclogs here to review! This was cute. I for one like the simple words and rhymes, and think it works very nicely. I love cats, so this ...
Aug 4, 2015 -
Re: Fear
Hi there, bethicus2, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here to review! Dang, just reading this story made me feel stressed. All of a sudden, I feel like I'm not doing ...
Aug 3, 2015 -
Re: Best Friends Forever
Hi again, Catlover211 (I've seen you around YWS enough to know what the numbers in your name are, finally)! cleverclogs here to review! Okay, before I even say anything about ...
Aug 2, 2015 -
Re: Wander
Hi there, Mysticalxx, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here to review your lovely work! This was a really beautiful poem. Your imagery was superb and it brought to my mind ...
Jul 30, 2015
