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  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Where I'm From

    Hey, Elysium (finally spelled that right)! cleverclogs here to save you from the Green Room! I'm from the bell of my trumpet and the tip of my paintbrush. I like ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My plot idea- Advice would be appreciated

    Hey there! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! My first word of advice: I think that this would probably be better off as a forum post or a blog ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Light and Dark

    Hey-o, ChocolateCello! cleverclogs here for an almost-review-day review! :P makes it hard to be mislead "Mislead" should be "misled". No big deal. Also, the punctuation is bothering me. You usually ...

    Aug 29, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: More Than That

    Hey, CardinalSouth! cleverclogs here to review! Does he feel the way like I do? This line doesn't make sense. Try replacing "like" with "that". This is no typical crush Ohhh ...

    Aug 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: School

    Yo, ChocolateCello! cleverclogs here to review! This will probably be a rather short review, since this is a short poem. :) This is funny and cute. A few suggestions: 1. ...

    Aug 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Dear Freshman

    Hello there, hermione315! cleverclogs here to review your lovely poem! As a rising freshman, I needed this. Normally, the transition from middle to high school wouldn't be a big deal ...

    Aug 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Song For A Delaware Winter

    Yo, mkultra98! cleverclogs here to review! I really like this, but, like the previous reviewer, I don't really understand it. It's like that one song that you love, but you ...

    Aug 12, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: A Repeating Repetitive Poem about Repeated Repetitiveness

    Yo, Catlover211! cleverclogs here for a quick review! This is hilarious. I love the repetitive repetition of repetitiveness. As I said in my post below, it reminds of me of ...

    Aug 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: House of Haiku #2

    Yo, Mysticalxx. cleverclogs here to review! Let's roll. The first thing I'll do is link you to a review that will link you to two wonderful haiku resources (link-ception!). The ...

    Aug 9, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Childhood Poetry

    Hi there, Mysticalxx! cleverclogs here to review! Since there are two different poems here, I'll split my review into two separate sections. Thoughts on "Rainbow" This was my favorite of ...

    Aug 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: I'm Melting...

    Hi again, Catlover211! cleverclogs here to review! I was totally going to review this for the July Review Day, but for whatever reason I was like, "nah, nevermind" and walked ...

    Aug 9, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cat

    Hi there, Mysticalxx! cleverclogs here to review! This was cute. I for one like the simple words and rhymes, and think it works very nicely. I love cats, so this ...

    Aug 4, 2015
  • Art » Literature, Culture Re: Fear

    Hi there, bethicus2, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here to review! Dang, just reading this story made me feel stressed. All of a sudden, I feel like I'm not doing ...

    Aug 3, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Best Friends Forever

    Hi again, Catlover211 (I've seen you around YWS enough to know what the numbers in your name are, finally)! cleverclogs here to review! Okay, before I even say anything about ...

    Aug 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Wander

    Hi there, Mysticalxx, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here to review your lovely work! This was a really beautiful poem. Your imagery was superb and it brought to my mind ...

    Jul 30, 2015


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