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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Work of Sins

    Hey trelose! Cheaper here. I really enjoy this piece. It flows very nicely making it for an easy read. I also really like the repeated use of the phrase "the ...

    May 15, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mask

    Hey elysium! (rad name btw) Cheaper here to check out this work. Already, I love the shortness and how quick it is to the point. Its a lot harder to ...

    May 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Bittersweet Day

    Hello trelose! I thoroughly enjoyed this piece and the mood it set. I connected with the perspective from the narrative and that's an important thing to do. Now, for critiques. ...

    May 13, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: an unwillingness to part

    Hello! I think I've reviewed you before, but nevertheless this was amazing. My favorite part of this is the mature use of diction. The words flow and you paint the ...

    Feb 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Wild and Free

    Hey! I really enjoy this poem and the picture tagged along with it! Kinda helps with creating the imagery in your heads. It flows fairly nicely and it isn't difficult ...

    Feb 17, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Coatless Boy

    Oh how I love this. I'm going to just jump into this. The structure of this piece is subtle enough to jsut read and flow nicely. The repetition of "Coatless ...

    Feb 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: Blown Away

    Wow. I'm honestly a little speechless. I must've read this atleast 10 times and I could keep going. This piece is just so beautifully constructed. I absolutely love the imagery ...

    Feb 6, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ketch and Company’s Midnight Garden

    Wow, I'm obsessed with this. I knew I'd enjoy this from the description of it; I expected to at the least, but you still surprised me. Firstly, before I forget, ...

    Feb 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Tears of War

    Hello, cakerissa! Cheaper here, ready to review this beautiful piece. Firstly, I notice the structure is short and sweet with just the right amount of flow, thanks to some rhyme ...

    Feb 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Film Re: I can't see through this blindfold god help me

    I was intrigued just reading the title. You set this piece up wonderfully. I enjoy the ups and downs depicted right from the start. Structurally, the stanzas are not too ...

    Feb 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bottled Up Emotions

    This is a vent piece yes, but it is a very relatable piece. With a view revisions, it could be perfect. I just enjoy this piece because it's emotionally raw. ...

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: This is a Love Story - Part 5

    Wow, this is a perfect work of art. I love the structure and flow of the piece as a whole. I'm sad because I haven't read any previous chapters as ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Come Back, Do...

    WOW This is phenomenal. The exquisite use of such diction while still painting the story in a manner that makes sense is such a hard thing to do. You don't ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: As I Look Back In Anger

    Wow. Honestly, I was hooked from the beginning. This is my type of poetry and the emotion you created blossomed beautifully as it progressed. The structure is spread out enough, ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Three Days That Would Have Been Different

    Hey, confetti! I'm really in awe right now. I feel like this should be a movie even though the production still wouldn't justify how amazing this was written. The structure/ ...

    Jan 31, 2016


There are darknesses in life and there are lights, and you are one of the lights, the light of all lights.
— Bram Stoker