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Re: The Work of Sins
Hey trelose! Cheaper here. I really enjoy this piece. It flows very nicely making it for an easy read. I also really like the repeated use of the phrase "the ...
May 15, 2016 -
Re: Mask
Hey elysium! (rad name btw) Cheaper here to check out this work. Already, I love the shortness and how quick it is to the point. Its a lot harder to ...
May 13, 2016 -
Re: The Bittersweet Day
Hello trelose! I thoroughly enjoyed this piece and the mood it set. I connected with the perspective from the narrative and that's an important thing to do. Now, for critiques. ...
May 13, 2016 -
Re: an unwillingness to part
Hello! I think I've reviewed you before, but nevertheless this was amazing. My favorite part of this is the mature use of diction. The words flow and you paint the ...
Feb 17, 2016 -
Re: Wild and Free
Hey! I really enjoy this poem and the picture tagged along with it! Kinda helps with creating the imagery in your heads. It flows fairly nicely and it isn't difficult ...
Feb 17, 2016 -
Re: Coatless Boy
Oh how I love this. I'm going to just jump into this. The structure of this piece is subtle enough to jsut read and flow nicely. The repetition of "Coatless ...
Feb 7, 2016 -
Re: Blown Away
Wow. I'm honestly a little speechless. I must've read this atleast 10 times and I could keep going. This piece is just so beautifully constructed. I absolutely love the imagery ...
Feb 6, 2016 -
Re: Ketch and Company’s Midnight Garden
Wow, I'm obsessed with this. I knew I'd enjoy this from the description of it; I expected to at the least, but you still surprised me. Firstly, before I forget, ...
Feb 5, 2016 -
Re: Tears of War
Hello, cakerissa! Cheaper here, ready to review this beautiful piece. Firstly, I notice the structure is short and sweet with just the right amount of flow, thanks to some rhyme ...
Feb 5, 2016 -
Re: I can't see through this blindfold god help me
I was intrigued just reading the title. You set this piece up wonderfully. I enjoy the ups and downs depicted right from the start. Structurally, the stanzas are not too ...
Feb 5, 2016 -
Re: Bottled Up Emotions
This is a vent piece yes, but it is a very relatable piece. With a view revisions, it could be perfect. I just enjoy this piece because it's emotionally raw. ...
Feb 3, 2016 -
Re: This is a Love Story - Part 5
Wow, this is a perfect work of art. I love the structure and flow of the piece as a whole. I'm sad because I haven't read any previous chapters as ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: Come Back, Do...
WOW This is phenomenal. The exquisite use of such diction while still painting the story in a manner that makes sense is such a hard thing to do. You don't ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: As I Look Back In Anger
Wow. Honestly, I was hooked from the beginning. This is my type of poetry and the emotion you created blossomed beautifully as it progressed. The structure is spread out enough, ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: The Three Days That Would Have Been Different
Hey, confetti! I'm really in awe right now. I feel like this should be a movie even though the production still wouldn't justify how amazing this was written. The structure/ ...
Jan 31, 2016
