Wow. Honestly, I was hooked from the beginning. This is my type of poetry and the emotion you created blossomed beautifully as it progressed. The structure is spread out enough, not too jumbled or lengthy, so the read flows gently. Word choice is also an essential key you rocked in this piece. The diction isn't too much, it fits a lot better than simple word choice. Each stanza draws me in with the first sentence, I tried to pick one but that is far too difficult. Your literary devices are implemented keenly, and grammatical errors are essentially non-existent. This is beyond a well-rounded piece that I thoroughly enjoy and I hope to come across more of your writing!
Your Friend,
Cheaper
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