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Great story, I very much enjoyed how your characters are described in such a unique way. I especially like how the angel is not represented as the classically beautiful and ...

I like this poem because it felt like the kind of thing you'd hear or read in some fantasy epic or lament. beautiful and creative, you've done a great job. ...

Beautiful poem, I like how've you kept it short and sweet yet were able to add plenty of detail. I'm not sure if you did it on purpose but there ...

I read the title and didn't know what to expect but then when I finished I really liked it. My brain was like "hey that's me" and so good job ...

You've captured what a lament is, sad but sweet. I agree with your previous review, watch out with your formatting, but really poetry is pretty flexible in most cases so ...

First things first there are a few spelling, capitalization and punctuation errors but I'm not going to write out each and everyone of them since your previous review for this ...

Just gotta say this right away, I got halfway and started making squeaking noises because I sensed what was coming (needed to share that) man that mental image is going ...

Interesting poem and very emotional. You've done a great job explaining and describing a (for lack of a better word) "sensitive" topic. There's a sort truthfulness in your poem that ...

That sent chills down my spine. It was like watching a movie in slow motion, the description was simply that good. I love how your character's mind is reflecting in ...

Review for you!!!!! This is pretty cool but there are some small mistakes (ex: skeletons lines the hallways... should be skeletons line the hallways hard difficult - pick one they ...

there is nothing really left to touch on your previous reviews have gone through all the little details to work on. As for my opinion, I really enjoy the message ...

I like this because it reminds me of how I've felt for a long while. To wish for someone (your perfect someone) to scoop you up into their arms. I ...

My review is purely my opinion on how I feel about this piece. I really like it and I agree with the other comment about how its simplicity is one ...

Wow, just wow. I love everything from the wording to the format! It seemed like this piece was going to be sad but then it hit me, the realization of ...

This is a powerful piece and a great one as well. I really like how you've used punctuation, I think its placement only added to the impact of the entire ...