Young Writers Society

Hello there, caliginous here~ First of all, you say you think this is trash? Well, I'm going to have to respectfully disagree with you there. Don't be so quick to ...

~Ello, caliginous here~ Oh no, just hours till Christmas! Gifts still need to be wrapped. Just wanted to say—so relatable. That's me every year. (I still haven't gone Christmas shopping ...

~Ello, caliginous here~ Amazing poem! So descriptive, yet somewhat vague at the same time. It's awesome how you did that! I have a few suggestions for you, so let's get ...

~Ello, caliginous here~ Wow. So relatable! Especially that fist line, "My useless self can't seem to write," gosh that's exactly how I feel every time I have writer's block! As ...

~Ello, caliginous here~ Amazing poem! I love the way you describe all that has happened and how exactly you felt throughout, yet still keep it clear and easy to understand. ...

~Ello, caliginous here~ Welcome, welcome!! I hope you are enjoying YWS so far! Excellent poem, first of all. You are amazing at describing what's going on in your head throughout ...

~Ello, caliginous here~ Welcome, welcome! I hope you love YWS so far! I love this story(?) I don't really know what to call it. Anyway, I have a few suggestions. ...

~Ello, caliginous here~ Exquisite poem. Tragically beautiful...absolutely stunning...insert more praise here.... Well anyway, time to be picky. "Fighting, hurting, killing, like hearts made of stone"

~Heylo...caliginous here~ Wow, this is a very deep and emotional piece...it's short, but the content really speaks to me. Ok, time to get down into the specifics (though there's not ...

~Heylo...caliginous here~ (yes, "heylo"...don't judge me) This is a hilarious piece of poetry you got here (I believe it does indeed have the right to be marked as humor, but ...

~Ello, caliginous here~ Beautiful poem. There's not much to critique here, but I'm going to try anyway. That first line is very powerful. Amazing beginning, it definitely caught my attention. ...

~Ello, caliginous here~ Ok, here's a short review because I'm really supposed to be doing homework right now... First of all, great imagery. You were able to make me feel ...

Hello, caliginous here for a quick review. I love music, so naturally I would love this poem. I do agree with you; music has the power to influence your mood, ...

Ello, caliginous here. This poem is beautiful, yet tragic. I love it. Anyway, I have a few suggestions... From the start, I am somewhat confused. Who's falling? One person or ...

Ello JoytheBrave caliginous here. This. Is. Amazin'. And that basically sums it up. But I'm going to go on anyway. Fifteen words, but this could be a metaphor for almost ...