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  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Falls and Scars

    Hey I'm Caitie. I want to first start off and say that I love this poem. It expresses what many of us go through in our lives. My favorite line ...

    May 10, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: I am a slave

    Hey iI'm Caitie, I really like your work em. I love how this expresses how fear controls a lot of everyone's life. I deal with fear everyday it take ahold ...

    Feb 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Not How We Dreamed

    Hey I'm Caitie (you know that though) I really love your poem and I can so relate to it. Why does reality have to come in a ruin everything. I ...

    Feb 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Time to Go

    Hey I'm Caitie I just wanted to say that this was a very deep piece. It shows the reader what someone goes threw to end up doing that. I am ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Learning to Let Go

    Hey I'm Caitie. I wanted to say that this was indeed a very sad but romantic poem. I love how in a shortish poem there is a big story. We ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Societys Image Of Me

    Hey I'm Caitie. I just wanted to say that this poem is really deep, I do have some suggestions though. I would try and not put periods in the middle ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hide the Fire Within

    Hey I'm Caitie. I love this poem because it explains exactly what alot of people think. I have a younger brother and if he sees that he's annoying me he'll ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Lost and Found

    Hey it's caitie. I just wanted to say that I love this poem and that everything you said fit perfectly together. I love the story in this and all the ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Flaws

    Hey it's Caitie. I wanted to start off and say that I love this poem. To me it mostly speaks about our flaws. Yes we have some, but who doesn't? ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Infuriating

    Hey I'm Caitie. First off I so relate to this, I don't understand why we need hormones. They just make life more confusing. You think you might like someone and ...

    Jan 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Little Mermaid

    Hey I'm Caitie. I really, really like this poem. It told the story of the little mermaid, but with a twist. Instead of a happy ending like all the rest, ...

    Jan 25, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Laughter Is The Best Medicine

    Hey I'm Caitie. I love this poem. Like you said in the poem, laughter is the best medicine. My favorite line is, "when you laugh you can forget all your ...

    Dec 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Rabbit's Roar

    Hey I'm Caitie. I really enjoyed this poem, I gave me a different perspective to look at. It shows that there can always be a different way of looking at ...

    Dec 15, 2015


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein