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  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Falls and Scars

    Hey I'm Caitie. I want to first start off and say that I love this poem. It expresses what many of us go through in our lives. My favorite line ...

    May 10, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: I am a slave

    Hey iI'm Caitie, I really like your work em. I love how this expresses how fear controls a lot of everyone's life. I deal with fear everyday it take ahold ...

    Feb 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Not How We Dreamed

    Hey I'm Caitie (you know that though) I really love your poem and I can so relate to it. Why does reality have to come in a ruin everything. I ...

    Feb 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Time to Go

    Hey I'm Caitie I just wanted to say that this was a very deep piece. It shows the reader what someone goes threw to end up doing that. I am ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Learning to Let Go

    Hey I'm Caitie. I wanted to say that this was indeed a very sad but romantic poem. I love how in a shortish poem there is a big story. We ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Societys Image Of Me

    Hey I'm Caitie. I just wanted to say that this poem is really deep, I do have some suggestions though. I would try and not put periods in the middle ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hide the Fire Within

    Hey I'm Caitie. I love this poem because it explains exactly what alot of people think. I have a younger brother and if he sees that he's annoying me he'll ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Lost and Found

    Hey it's caitie. I just wanted to say that I love this poem and that everything you said fit perfectly together. I love the story in this and all the ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Flaws

    Hey it's Caitie. I wanted to start off and say that I love this poem. To me it mostly speaks about our flaws. Yes we have some, but who doesn't? ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Infuriating

    Hey I'm Caitie. First off I so relate to this, I don't understand why we need hormones. They just make life more confusing. You think you might like someone and ...

    Jan 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Little Mermaid

    Hey I'm Caitie. I really, really like this poem. It told the story of the little mermaid, but with a twist. Instead of a happy ending like all the rest, ...

    Jan 25, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Laughter Is The Best Medicine

    Hey I'm Caitie. I love this poem. Like you said in the poem, laughter is the best medicine. My favorite line is, "when you laugh you can forget all your ...

    Dec 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Rabbit's Roar

    Hey I'm Caitie. I really enjoyed this poem, I gave me a different perspective to look at. It shows that there can always be a different way of looking at ...

    Dec 15, 2015


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