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Re: Rewrite of Attack
Okay, I am here to review this one now. I hope I help you with it thisislegacy. Alright, so I feel that this one shows a lot more emotion and ...
Sun Jul 23, 2017 7:14 pm -
Re: Stranger
Alright. So I am bvbAngel and I want to drop by to leave a review here. Welcome to YWS!!! Okay so now to reviewing this. It was really good, I ...
Sun Jul 23, 2017 2:47 am -
Re: stand still at the edge of the world
Wow okay so I am here to leave you a review if you do not mind!!! Personally I loved this, there is a few errors but nothing I have seen ...
Sun Jul 23, 2017 2:39 am -
Re: Lonely Vs Alone
Wow. Okay so I am bvbAngel, and as I was reading I seen a lot of truth in there. Such as when you say that when a person is in ...
Sat Jul 22, 2017 11:18 pm -
Re: Ordadus [2.4]
Hi! I am bvbAngel and I am here to leave you a review if you don't mind. Well I really enjoyed this. Its very descriptive and well with wording. While ...
Sat Jul 22, 2017 6:33 pm -
Re: 3 a.m.
Okay so I am dropping in for a review. And the first thing that I seen was the rating. Really as I read I didn't see any reason for it ...
Sat Jul 22, 2017 12:50 am -
Re: The Tree
Okay, so I am bvbAngel and I want to stop in to give you a review if its okay with you! Alright so really, dang this is really creative and ...
Sat Jul 22, 2017 12:38 am -
Re: for so long
Alright. So I am here for a review. Really the beginning of this poem kind of, didn't grab my attention like I thought it wad going to. I can see ...
Sat Jul 22, 2017 12:23 am -
Re: His life
Okay, so I am here for a review if you do not mind. Welcome to YWS! Really all together is was amazing. There is a few mistakes with grammar but ...
Sat Jul 22, 2017 12:02 am -
Re: The world will move on
Mind if I drop in for a review? Okay so honest, this is all together a really good poem. I like the wording that you used and the image you ...
Fri Jul 21, 2017 11:22 pm -
Re: Breaking
Mind if I drop in for a review? Okay so first off I love how you said that your heart isn't broken, that instead its just sick. I like the ...
Fri Jul 21, 2017 9:21 pm -
Re: Loved Then Put Aside
Hey! I hope you dont mind me dropping in for a review! Okay so first, I really liked this, it is really true. I feel this piece was peaceful, and ...
Fri Jul 21, 2017 8:51 pm -
Re: The world will move on
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Fri Jul 21, 2017 8:35 pm
Mind if I drop in for a review? Okay so honest, this is all together a really good poem. I like the wording that you used and the image you ... -
Re: Broken Girl
Mind if i drop on for a review? Okay well I personally loved this. It has great meaning and I relate to it all too well. Your wording is amazing ...
Fri Jul 21, 2017 7:00 pm -
Re: Attack
Hey,Honestly I cant really see anything that would need improvement. It was all amazing and I loved all of this poem. It showed the perfect amount of emotion and the ...
Fri Jul 21, 2017 6:10 pm
