Hi! Welcome to YWS!! Thought I'd drop in for a quick review.
This poem is simply AMAZING!!! I loved it. In this age of competition and materialism, this poem has a great relevance and importance. It portrays the condition of the weak and the sad so well.
I did not notice any grammatical mistakes as such. Writing phrases instead of complete sentences somehow made the poem more realistic and emotional. You used punctuation marks wherever required and the words were written well. I liked the rhyme scheme.
Now coming to the actual content of the poem. It was full of poetic emotions and thoughts. I don't have many words to describe its beauty. All I can say is that I loved it very much. You rarely get to read a poem which is so beautiful and simple (yet something mysterious). Your creativity and talent shines in every line. Keep up the good work!
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