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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Rewrite of Attack

    Okay, I am here to review this one now. I hope I help you with it thisislegacy. Alright, so I feel that this one shows a lot more emotion and ...

    Jul 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Stranger

    Alright. So I am bvbAngel and I want to drop by to leave a review here. Welcome to YWS!!! Okay so now to reviewing this. It was really good, I ...

    Jul 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: stand still at the edge of the world

    Wow okay so I am here to leave you a review if you do not mind!!! Personally I loved this, there is a few errors but nothing I have seen ...

    Jul 23, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Lonely Vs Alone

    Wow. Okay so I am bvbAngel, and as I was reading I seen a lot of truth in there. Such as when you say that when a person is in ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Ordadus [2.4]

    Hi! I am bvbAngel and I am here to leave you a review if you don't mind. Well I really enjoyed this. Its very descriptive and well with wording. While ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: 3 a.m.

    Okay so I am dropping in for a review. And the first thing that I seen was the rating. Really as I read I didn't see any reason for it ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Tree

    Okay, so I am bvbAngel and I want to stop in to give you a review if its okay with you! Alright so really, dang this is really creative and ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: for so long

    Alright. So I am here for a review. Really the beginning of this poem kind of, didn't grab my attention like I thought it wad going to. I can see ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: His life

    Okay, so I am here for a review if you do not mind. Welcome to YWS! Really all together is was amazing. There is a few mistakes with grammar but ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: The world will move on

    Mind if I drop in for a review? Okay so honest, this is all together a really good poem. I like the wording that you used and the image you ...

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Breaking

    Mind if I drop in for a review? Okay so first off I love how you said that your heart isn't broken, that instead its just sick. I like the ...

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Loved Then Put Aside

    Hey! I hope you dont mind me dropping in for a review! Okay so first, I really liked this, it is really true. I feel this piece was peaceful, and ...

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: The world will move on

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    Mind if I drop in for a review? Okay so honest, this is all together a really good poem. I like the wording that you used and the image you ...

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Broken Girl

    Mind if i drop on for a review? Okay well I personally loved this. It has great meaning and I relate to it all too well. Your wording is amazing ...

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Attack

    Hey,Honestly I cant really see anything that would need improvement. It was all amazing and I loved all of this poem. It showed the perfect amount of emotion and the ...

    Jul 21, 2017


You know that place between sleep and awake, that place where you still remember dreaming? That’s where I’ll always love you. That’s where I’ll be waiting.
— J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan