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Thanks for the replay I changed a couple of the stuff youtold me about.

Lol thanks guys for replying back and letting know on my mistakes I'll be sure to edit it soon.

Wow thats pretty good. I loved how it got my attention and just made me continue reading the story pretty good story line. Looking more from your work, keep it ...

Wow, I really like this poem. Nice and short.

I dont get this poem, Lol do you mind filling me in? Thanks.

This poem is good and its funny how the characture keeps coming back like a drug with out his fix. :) I enjoyed this poem, looking forward to more of ...

Lol I like this poem. Another poem Another review Another like Another post :) Keep it up! Love your work.

Wow thats an amazing poem. You really know how to catch emotion and put it into details :) good job, and keep up the good work!

This is interesting, some parts I dont get but thats the part about poems, it doesn't have to make sence great job. :)

this is...... good!! l love the way you use words and form it to make the human mind think of something else, awesome job, love to see more!! :)

Wow this is good, l love the last paragraph its a nice way to end it. Keep on writing and welcome to YWS!!

I was wondering if your gonna work on chapter two? Its kinda good and would like to see where this goes! :)

Thats a really good lyrical poem the song flowed easly togather. Awesome job!! :)

This poem is actually really good!! so much emotion behind those words. Wisperer is right if you change it to what he posted for you it would make it way ...

Thats a really good poem so much emotion, you can really feel what this guy is going through. And the part where he wakes up to find that the world ...