Published June 17, 2011
Another age;
Another time.
Another song;
Another rhyme.
Another man,
Another dove.
Another chance,
Another love.
A love so tender,
A love so sweet.
A love so potent,
A love so neat.
Another promise;
Another fate.
Another key,
Another gate.
Another boy,
Another Miss.
Another dream;
Another kiss.
A kiss so potent,
A kiss so neat.
A kiss so tender,
A kiss so sweet.
Another song,
Another rhyme.
Another age,
Another time.
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Your poem was vary flowing and had just the right zing to it. Nice job.
the ANOTHER concept is beautiful and you did a good work putting it together but it would have been more interesting and have more mean if you had placed a stanza with something more deep after each ANOTHER stanza like you tried to do in stanza 3 for example after your first stanza
"Another age;
Another time.
Another song;
Another rhyme."
And there lies man
wallowing away with the
rhyme's of the song
not paying attention
to the time that
will turn his blonde hair grey
In essence it will make the poem more interesting and educating
keep up the good work
I like the fact that you have written your poem in a very unique style... although maybe if you had started each stanza with a differen word instead of 'another' all the time it would lighten up the poem a bit more.
Other than that, I think it is very well written and i love that it is of a different style!!
I like it too. Maybe, I'd find a different word instead of neat. But that's my opinion.
Lol I like this poem.
Keep it up! Love your work.
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