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Dear AutoPilot, First of all, I enjoyed this poem because it does steer into the negative, but it isn't a poem that commands suicide. It's not a threat to the ...

Dear fortis, This is a nice little paragraph. I especially loved "Because Today always becomes Yesterday, Last Summer, When I Was Young" and "I am not yet ready to surrender ...

Dear Burrow, How do I even begin? This poem is amazing. I absolutely love it. It makes a comparison between the childish games of hide and seek to the mysterious ...

Dear Remembrance, This is a very uplifting poem compared to what I originally thought it was going to turn out to be. Very nice. The message is clear, and it's ...

Dear Codayy, I love this poem! I love what you did with "f l o w e d" and " passed by." I love the appearance and the feeling of ...

I enjoy the appeal to the reader with NaNoWriMo. I, myself, have never entered NaNoWriMo, but I can tell that it would be very stressful. Maybe stressful isn't the right ...

This has an amazing plot twist! I'm not sure that I enjoyed the last paragraph and the last sentence of the second last paragraph. It doesn't seem to flow with ...

This sounds really cool. The rhyme scheme isn't too far apart. It's kind of up and personal, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. I think it is well done. It ...

As a FNAF fan (I'm not really part of the "fandom" but I still enjoy the game), I would like to say bravo. This is a really good poem built ...

It sounds very good together. I like how you separated the different voices, it looks very good. It is confusing in some parts, but I can kind of understand what ...

This is very good! The rhyme scheme is great, and it didn't seem like you were just finding words that rhymed, they actually worked cleverly into the scheme. Great work! ...

I - honest to God - whispered to myself "I love this" as I read through the prologue. I honestly would LOVE to hear more. I love your word choice, ...

The dialogue in this entry is realistic, easy to follow, and relateable. I took a look at the last review by anngelalu and I agree with most of the things ...