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Well, Firstly, i think that there are some really good aspects to this poem including... 'The killer looked in awe' good start. Immediately intorduces the poem . the line..'The man ...

WOw, this is really deep and meaningful. poems that mean something are always good for readers to read. I love how you list the things he didnt do. It shows ...

very moving indeed. :) to be honest, at first i thought it was going to be like in a soap with the woman running away! but you proved me wrong ...

Firstly, u write beautifully. i will get the tips over with one really likes tips so i will not make them last long. 1) quick thing...you need a space in ...

wow, Firstly, this was amazingly well written. :) so powerful and touching. good job. i love how you begin with questions; it really kickstarts the poem :) um, just a ...

wow. this was a very powerful poem indeed. especially the single lines! the rhyming is also really good :) just a few pointeres... 'without' is one word. you made it ...

not only lyrics but definately poetry. it is short, sweet and very well written. :) you are missing a question mark after the word night in this sentence 'So please ...

i read this and instantly thought wow. the way you have written it is so amazing and u have paid a lot of attention to detail. i love your rhyming ...

This has been written really well. :) obviously rather shocking at the end! a severed hand. ! this adds in an element of mystery to the story. i thinks its ...

i understand why you love this piece. it really is very good. well done. there are so many great points to make. where to begin? hmm. firstly, i love the ...

its true and i will use the old phrase...dont judge a book by its cover. this is really nice and has a clear message :) good work as was with ...

this is a very well thought out and meaningful poem :) good work. you have got some really great lines in here. in fact here are some of my favourites... ...

firstly, this is a very good topic to write about. it is true, many things on the news are about the negatives in life. Unfortunately, they appear to be dominant. ...

War is a very common topic to write about so it has to be done well. i believe that you have done a good job of this poem and it ...

AWESOME. hehe. this was really funny and entertaining to the reader. the things i would have picked up on have already been mentoned. a very promising story. im interested to ...