This is the edited version, which I like better.
"It really is cruel that you have to go to school the day after Halloween." Kayla thought. "Everyone is tired and hyped up on sugar, but no, we still have to get up before the sun does and get on the smelly bus to go someplace that nobody in there right mind wants to go to."
Sitting at her desk thinking this, she struggled to complete extremely difficult algebra problems while surrounded by piles of papers and back-breaking heavy textbooks. Feeling the sudden need for sugar, she reached into her bag of quickly-diminishing candy and pulled out a chocolate bar. Just before she could take a bite, the doorbell rang.
"I bet it's that creepy salesman with the too-tight pants again." Kayla said to herself as she ran down the stairs. She really shouldn't be answering the door, what with nobody else home, but she hated listening to the doorbell ring for ten minutes by some persistent person. Opening the door, she found that no one was there. Thinking it might have been the UPS man delivering a package, she looking down. She found a bulging brown paper bag on the doormat.
"Weird," Kayla thought. "UPS guys deliver boxes, not paper bags."
She picked it up gingerly. It wasn't ticking like a bomb, so she brought it into the house. As she carried the bag over the threshold, she felt liquid dripping through it. But the liquid wasn't clear, like water.
It was red.
Dark red.
It was blood.
She screamed, and dropped the bag on the floor. Feeling queasy, she ran into the kitchen and grabbed a pair of salad tongs from the drawer. Approaching the bag cautiously, she poked it with the plastic utensil.
Nothing happened.
Gingerly she picked up the bag and started to walk with it. But before she could take one step toward the kitchen sink, the brown paper split, sending its contents to the floor.
It wasn't a check for a million dollars that landed on the floor.
It wasn't some childish prank of dog crap.
It was a hand.
A real, bloody, cold, and lifeless human hand.
Kayla screamed so loud, Koreans could probably hear her.
She did the first thing that came to her head; calling the police. Almost tripping in her haste, she ran to the phone and dialed the number.
"911 what is your emergency?" a calm female voice spoke.
"Send help, someone sent me a----"
Kayla dropped the phone.
"Hello? Hello? Is anyone there?" the operator asked.
A hand was closing around Kayla's throat, making her incapable of speech and fighting for air.
Kayla never got a chance to finish her Halloween candy.
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