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Oh, how I love this. heart

Well, we're all here to learn, buddy. That was real coding? Huh, I guess I am a bit ignorant ;) I don't know coding at all. Still, the reader has ...

I'm not surprised you would love this, it's definately your humor! You know what, I want it on the spotlight too.

This is amazing, Timmy. Keep it up!

I realize, however I got the feeling this was not stylistical intention.

It's really up to you how much sea jargon or commands you want to use. The readers will rarely be clueless to it. There should always be a bare minimum ...

This is really nice, girl. Good job ;)

Thanks for the review Olive, it's great! Past/present tense, I hate that guy. One day I'll tame him. I do have problems with making dialogue, and also making it flow ...

Your edits are already looking great.

Thanks for the review Dragon. I essentially had big problems with the middle paragraph. I tried to work around it, but I would have to re-work the entire piece then, ...

Hey polka! Lovely poem, I like it a lot. I'd change the ending paragraph though, it doesn't hit as well as the others. Feels a bit off. Cheers Birkhoff

I'm not too familiar with YWS Storybooks, but I'd say they're not the best source of info. It is a learning site, after all. An awesome guide for quotation marks:

Whoa, this is getting a lot of love....even getting them teary eyed (what?). Well, it does nothing to me. It's a basic idea executed in.......two sentences. Sigh. I could seriously ...

Hello fire, thanks for your input. To clear something up a bit, I'm speaking to my grandfather about my father. You see, he suffered a lot of abuse by him, ...

Oh, I'm sorry. All the other chapters are all named the exact same, I'm not sure what I thought but it didn't occur to me. Duh ;)