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  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Woman

    Hey It's Bigmacloves Here For Another Review... This poem was a very outstanding piece of literature. I say that because it didn't just represent the basics of the topic. It ...

    Mar 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: As We Get Older

    Hello, this is Bigmacloves (Mac Desvignes)!!!!! I have more than enough stuff to tell you about your poem. However, no one has the time to here me talk about useless ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Chapter 1 (Title, Undecided)

    Mac Desvignes, Hello, please ignore how rusty I am at writing these types of reviews. It has been a while since I have logged onto The Young Writers Society. So, ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Paper Girl

    This was an amazing way to express the concept of a girl who lets people use her -- I am really impressed. The idea of a paper girl is really ...

    Sep 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Action / Adventure Re: Take Me Home: Chapter Two: The Nectarine

    Well, let me start off with, "Wow!" I am astounded because that was wonderful. I am in love with this story, and I hope to see it continue because I ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Take Me Home- Chapter One: How Charming

    Hey its Bigmacloves here for another review.... P.S. I just copied some one else review sense they had all my points in it This is an excellent start to a ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Music

    Hey it is Bigmacloves here for another review I'm very suprised ! I thought this was gonna be a flow nightmare because all the lines were either really long or ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Love,Friends,and Family. Oh My!- Chapter 1

    Hey Catcha01 it is Bigmacloves here for another revire, WHAT THE FUCK!!!!! This was an outstanding piece of literature it left me wanting more. I love how you made it ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Other » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Quick Story Bio

    Hey Catnip it is Bigmacloves here for a tiny review. I just came across this and I would say I like where this is heading. This is a very brief ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: A Bisexual's Opinion On Life

    Hey it is Bigmacloves here for another review, Honestly this was a great piece of literature. I thought this was amazing. I really do hope that you write a novel/book ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Call Girl [1]

    Hey it is Bigmacloves here for another review, Honestly this was a great piece of literature. At first I assumed that you were a girl when I started reading it ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: What To Do?

    Dear SecreteJournalist It is Bigmacloves here for another review, This is honestly a really well written poem. I love how it is very dramatic, yet very simple. I also enjoyed ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You.

    Hey it’s Mac here for a review, This piece of literature is actually really outstanding. I love that you included Soul Eater in it. He is one of my favorite ...

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Born To Fight

    Hey Mac here for a review, This piece of literature is not half bad at all. I think you have a great idea flowing through your head. It also seems ...

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: 6 Senses *Intro*

    This is an outstanding start and I believe the rest of the story will be even more outstanding. I love the idea of a sixth sense and I wonder if ...

    Jun 5, 2013


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein