bigdreamsforagirl

Hey,I really likes the concept of it but I think you should add more deatils tot he story. Also I think you should show more character emotions but the concept ...

I really like this poem. I liked the structure of it and the rhyme. Please keep writing,this is really good!

Hahahahha i really liked that you created a little suspense. I loved the end part it was a total surprise. Keep it up! This was really good.

I really liked this and the rhyme was good. Keep up the good work!

Wow,this is really good. The message is simply beautiful. I like the depth of your words and i can actually feel you pain. Keep up the good work. This is ...

Nice poem. I just think it need a little more editing in some parts but other than that good job! Keep up the good work.

Aww this is really good. I can really feel how much you loved that guy and I'm sure he would've loved this. Good job! Keep it up and stay strong!

I really liked this. I think it just needs a little bit more editing. Other than that it was really good. Nice job!

Hahahaha this was a rather funny poem but i liked it :) goood job!

I likes the poem and the message was just beautiful the only problem is probably the ending. The ending was too short and didn't fit the rest of the poem.But ...

I loved your poem. I thought the rhyme was very good and the overall concept was really touching. Keep up with the good work,you're really talented!

I reaallyy liked this poem. It may have cliche in it but we all use cliche. I loved "Mitch,I can face the lies,you can only advice is you should end ...

I like that it was straight to the point. Short but really good and its true words are our biggest weapon.

I liked this piece. It was very short but I liked how you used the rose to deliver your message.

I liked this very much. I wish you would've continued it. My favorite part is "I'm a fool t doubt my feelings". We are all fools when it comes to ...