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Re: Abortion
Great, so many Christians proclaiming their faith here, not that it's a bad thing, it's awesome. About Abortion, i think it's very, extremely wrong! How could you take a life, ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: The Christian Defense
I think this is a truth that can't be denied. i have a few questions though and i would like your answers to it. it is determined by the controversy ...
Jan 28, 2014 -
Re: The first chill of winter
Hey Laure, bee here for the Cobalt Critiquers! This is so engrossing, from the title till the end. It has a very catchy title and I love how you didn't ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Macarena (A Poem From A Hipster's Point of View)
firstly, @Strange, you cried? i cried too! hey, I'm Bee! I love Eminem so much do you? 'cause this was a very Eminem-like piece. I was practically rapping it, not ...
Jan 20, 2014 -
Re: Chatroom Encounters: Prologue.
hey, Harshita, took me a while to spell your name correctly. i really think this was a beautiful piece of work. For a prologue, perfect. You should try going back ...
Jan 20, 2014 -
Re: Our Vision of Change
Crap! Timmy you did it! I love this, I'm not in review mode but i felt I had to say something about this. This is an article in poetic formation, ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Queen Bee
hey, Inkpot, you did review my work so thank you for that. Here's your review. This is a great piece, realistic but light. I like the fact that you said ...
Jan 13, 2014 -
Re: We love too fast and learn too slow
Sensational! You discussed time, anger, light and death, without making it too obvious as the sub-title or underlaying subject matter. Love, you used these four elements to discuss love, Cliche ...
Jan 11, 2014 -
Re: Final Breaths of Final Hate
"Blank Photos with blank faces"- i think there should be a comma at the end before the next line. this line is very artistic and flows well into the second. ...
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: December Skies
Review time: Everyone that has reviewed has described this as a painting. what is this painting? December Skies, just like the title suggests. I think you did a very good ...
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: My Screams Don't Carry Through the Pages
every single time i try to write a review for your works, i end up speechless. i feel completely inferior knowing that there is someone out there who has surpassed ...
Dec 12, 2013 -
Re: I am 21
this is beautiful! This reminds me of my friend his belief or unbelief in himself, i must say, it was carefully and perfectly sculptured out and my friend would disapprove ...
Dec 11, 2013 -
Re: Precept Essay- Meaning
you have no idea how inspiring this is, or you do right? I was troubled for a while but something here caught me and i have swallowed it and accepted ...
Dec 11, 2013 -
Re: I, am not a food can
ooooooooooooo...........*squeals* AWESOME!!!!! hello, I'm bee and i love this.......i mean, this is your review. :D this is so wonderful and interesting. the first stanza says "who are we?" second, "w
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: The Church is Bloodstained
hello bee here and this is your review! firstly, is this some sort of haiku? it could pass as one. few words with a lot of meaning and i don't ...
Dec 10, 2013
