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Re: Demolition Lovers
Hi! Here for a quick review: I love the contrast you set up from the simple times of high school and the transition to the dark and twisty times of ...
Mar 17, 2017 -
Re: take me back
Hi Apricity! I will be writing a short review here: First off--I love your employment of two languages in this piece. I wish I could read your tongue to get ...
Mar 17, 2017 -
Re: adolescence
Hi Nikayla! I'll be writing a short review here: First of all, I love love love the imagery in this poem! All for the specificity in the setting and the ...
Mar 17, 2017 -
Re: If Schools Were Cool
Hey there, beccalicous94 here to review your poem! Your topic is one that is very relatable, the tough times we face in mandatory schooling. The author definitely expresses a hopeful ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: The Dark Night
Hey there beccalicious94 here to review your piece! I would just like to start off by saying this is one of the stronger pieces I've seen on YWS, so you ...
May 5, 2014 -
Re: Weeping Willow
Welcome to YWS, Beccalicious94 here to review your work. I'd like to first off note that the description of the conception of the poem instantly drew me, as I am ...
Nov 29, 2013 -
Re: Still Here
Beccalicious94 here to review your work. Although this poem is only four lines, you can see the narrator has strong feelings about an antagonist and how they treat them, but ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Ask Me Why
Beccalicious94 here to review your poem. I wanted to start off by saying I really liked your piece. I thought you took the topic and expounded on it with clear ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: (Who's Gonna Love) A Crazy Girl
Beccalicious94 here to review your lyrics. I wanted to start off by saying I loved this! I liked the theme of the song and thought you did a great job ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: in debt to you twice more
I'm going to start out by saying this is one of the most powerful poems on YWS. You use vivid verbs throughout and draw the reader in to the narrative. ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: gay, It's not some mutation.
Welcome to YWS, I'm beccalicious94 here to review your poem. First off, it was a pleasure to read. You picked a poignant and (unfortunately) relevant topic to today's times and ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Come to Me
Hey there! Beccalicious94 reporting for reviewing duty! I am going to start off by saying this is one of the stronger poems I have read on YWS. I actually disagree ...
Nov 22, 2013 -
Re: in debt to you twice more
I'm going to start out by saying this is one of the most powerful poems on YWS. You use vivid verbs throughout and draw the reader in to the narrative. ...
Nov 20, 2013 -
Re: Significance.
As soon as I started reading this poem I was sucked into it's fast pace and excitement. Although I'm not familiar with Poe's poem, I was nonetheless impressed despite possibly ...
Nov 19, 2013 -
Re: Won't You Dance With Me?
First off, welcome to YWS! After reading your poem, I thought this would make a great song. Many of the verses repeat themselves and their is a clear progression of ...
Nov 19, 2013
