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Re: Shades of Sadness
Hi Dachsie! Becca here for a quick review. I thought the idea of depicting/delineating the shades of sadness was a really neat one. I like how each one has its ...
Jun 19, 2017 -
Re: A 3rd Person Omniscient Story about Spreading Butter on a Waffle
Hi JumpyDot! Becca here for a quick review. This piece really had a great voice. It reminds me of Kurt Vonnegut/Etgar Keret/the tone of the second season of "Masters of ...
Jun 18, 2017 -
Re: Beatnik Poetry Sucks
Hey Werthan! Becca here for a quick review. It's time this piece finally got a review. It seems like you have a lot of feelings about Beatnik poetry. You seem ...
Jun 18, 2017 -
Re: Dear Past Lover
Hi Klennon. Becca here for quick review. If you are interested in making this piece stronger, I would definitely encourage you to use more imagery, and rely less heavily on ...
Jun 18, 2017 -
Re: Everyone Act Natural!
Hi Redbox. Becca here for quick review. I thought this script moved so fast that when I blinked, I was almost at the ending. I think all of the characters ...
Jun 18, 2017 -
Re: The Last Calculator
Hey RedBox, Becca here for a quick review. So, not too many scripts on here. I wonder what you envisioned this being--a TV show, a stage production? I thought there ...
Jun 18, 2017 -
Re: Bridges
Hey there bluebird, Becca here for a (long overdue) quick review. I loved this piece so it was very hard to review and come up with constructive criticism. I will ...
Jun 17, 2017 -
Re: To PenguinAttack
Hi fortis, Becca here for a quick review, it seems that one is very overdue. And I can see why people have been reticent to leave a review (myself included). ...
Jun 16, 2017 -
Re: a diagram explaining my body to you
Hi all! Becca here for a quick review. I'm going to walk you through my thought process as I read this poem (several times). The title made me think that ...
Jun 16, 2017 -
Re: she calls me selfish
Hi marms! Becca here for a quick review. I really liked this poem, and I definitely think it deserved its recognition in the Literary Spotlight. In the first stanza, you ...
Jun 15, 2017 -
Re: Hockey
Hi 123PixieAOD! Becca here for a quick review. It is very clear that the speaker of this piece is a fan of hockey. So much so that they think it ...
Jun 15, 2017 -
Re: Self-expansion: A spoken word poem
Hi indieeloise, Becca here for a quick review. I wanted to start off by saying I really empathized with the speaker of the poem, and could really feel their pain. ...
Jun 14, 2017 -
Re: broken sea shells
Hi marms, Becca here for a quick review. One of the reasons I liked this poem was for the extended metaphor you used throughout. I like how the speaker's brokenness ...
Jun 13, 2017 -
Re: Blank Beginnings
Hi EnchantedPanda! Becca here for a quick review. Overall, I really liked this poem. I thought you had some beautiful images and used evocative language. My main concern I see ...
Jun 12, 2017 -
Re: In the Eye (3/3)
Hey Lauren! Becca back again to review part 3 of your story. Out of all of the parts, I liked this one the best. The language was even more beautiful ...
Jun 12, 2017
