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Hello Myjaspercat! Basia77201 here with a brief review! I love this poem! I did have a couple things to nitpick at though... The last line says "the hardest part has ...

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Hello Myjaspercat! Basia77201 here with a brief review! I love this poem! I did have a couple things to nitpick at though... The last line says "the hardest part has ...

Hello Spartan118! Ok, I think the message is totally great, and I really feel your pain. I don't exactly agree with the rhyming thing that SadSorrow mentioned. However, I feel ...

Hi Basia here! WOw its been long since I wrote a review, and I totally missed review day! I haven't been on this website in a month or so... Here ...

Hi there! Basia77201 here. This is funny. I also find it funny how little kids hate getting clothes, and as we get older, for girls at least, we hope to ...

Hello there, Lumi! Basia77201 here with a probably horrible review. I'm not very good with reviews, but I will try. So first off: Holy cow. Wow just holy cows mooing ...

Hello, and WELCOME TO YWS!!!!!! ----------------------------- Uhh... What...? Ok well that was a short story.... It made me laugh. BECAUSE I LAUGHED AT NOT KNOWING WHAT TO COMMENT ON IT! ...

Hello there Questio! I like it! I really really like it! I don't really have any issues or critique, so thats a good thing. However the only thing I would ...

Hello there Aley! Ok so I think the parts after the "Pad" line made a little more sense and it was easier for me to visualize. I honestly don't really ...

Hello there supz! I see you are a very new member, so WELCOME TO YWS!!!! I hope you enjoy it here as much as I do. IF you need anything ...

Hello there acm! I really love this poem. And YOU really love the wind! Reminds me of a beloved friend that loves storms.... I really like how in each stanza ...

HI Dustbunny! Wow. That was inspirational. I feel like this should be a song that plays everywhere. Maybe put it in lyrics, too? I don't know. With the "Don't lie ...

O.K.... THAT was a poem i didn't quite understand.... I didn't really find it funny either. I don't know, just not the poem for me. I didn't understand that last ...

COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm so glad someone is finally brave enough to post something like this. It can be hard to show you are a follower of christ in our world today. ...

Wha...???? OK I gotta say that wasn't THE funniest. I didn't really understand the first one, and it felt like the rhyme was forced. It didn't flow. "Only to say ...