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Hello, Spartan!

This is Eros here to write a review for your beauiful piece of poetry!

The title of the poem is attractive and related with the poem.

The poem was romantic and had beautiful emotions. I liked the theme and the main idea of the poem. I like how you have presented the feelings and thoughts through a wonderful, and meaning poem.
This had feelings and emotions.
I liked how the poem flows. It has a smooth touch. The words you have used are simple and expresses everything fully. You have painted the feelings very beautifully. Just a nit-picky typo here:

Anjelica I will always miss you beauitful

Not bad, but the poem needs several small adjustments.
For one, the poem didn't really flow breaking the impact that some poems possess.
For two, there are several lines that don't make grammatical sense, for example "End of poem".
And for three, it appears whoever abandoned the protagonist simply isn't interested in him, also, the woman seems to be irresponsible for not trying to stop the collapse of a relationship.
This poem is pretty good, but there are several errors, fix those and you have a emotionally moving poem.

There are only two or three lines in this entire poem that I would encourage you to re-write. I get the feeling that this is a very personal piece, so I will only make that bare minimum of critique.

The first line,

"She finds you a new man."

This leaves me confused...did she find herself a new man or did she find "you" a new man.
It needs some clarity, but shouldn't be hard to fix. ^.^

Then, this line:

"It's you beautiful I want." A comma or two would help this out.

"It's you beautiful, I want."

"Anyone else means nothing" This isn't natural grammar. "Everyone else means nothing," or
"No one else could mean anything" make more sense grammatically.

Keep writing, I know Break ups are never easy.

[ Edit ]

Hello Spartan118!

Ok, I think the message is totally great, and I really feel your pain. I don't exactly agree with the rhyming thing that SadSorrow mentioned. However, I feel like the poem gets a choppy feel because of the "Anyone else means nothing compared to you" part. I would replace 'anyone' with 'everyone'. Or "No one can hold a candle to you." That shows more effort put into the poem.
The 'end of poem' part is also a bit odd. Like it is obviously the end of the poem-you don't need to mention that. That makes a lot of the poem tense, in a way. Also I think that maybe at the end, it would sound even more beautiful if you said something like, "Beautiful Anjelica, I will always miss you." But that is just my opinion.

First off,

The message you want to deliver is great,
But try to rhyme the words with each other.
That way it'll read better and can be spoken nicer.
So try to use an scheme like:
Abab
Abab or
Abcabc
Things like that'll make it a way better poem, so just try it and try to find the correct words connecting your phrases.

This is my first review by the way...