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Hey rev! I'm here to read and review! Thanks for sharing your poem! "my fingers trace the hole you left when you entered, my skin swollen and tender." Oof, why ...

Hi Zoe! Saw you in the green room and wanted to check out your work. :) You came back, but I still shed those tears You can't take things back ...

Hello herb! Saw you in the Green Room and wanted to check out your work :) vestal corpse Great word! i have no power over those who snap my wings ...

Hello OakTree! I noticed your short story in the green room and wanted to check it out. Look like you just joined so welcome in! Hope you have as good ...

Hi Firespy! I am here to read and review your work! Hello Stranger! Welcome to my cemetery. Are you looking for knowledge, secrets, skeletons in the closet? Or perhaps it's ...

Hi Silly!! I'm here to read and review! I think the original title described a parasite perfectly. Everyone will see it through their own filter. I am a mother who ...

Hi E! I read some of the other reviews before submitting mine. I was a bit confused too! I thought maybe this was a flashback but then it never flashed ...

Hello E! Just finished your first chapter and I really like your protagonist's voice and you writing style. I think this is a great start to a very interesting story! ...

Hi Rev! Thank you for clarifying the history in your comment. I have never heard of Saint Dwynwen and it's an interesting tale. I must say I love this poem. ...

Hi Alex! I enjoyed your poem and love that it's a realistic take on what Disney likely saw as "every little girl's fantasy". I LOVE Cinderella retellings and if you ...

Hello Ip! I like your poem and feel it is a very relatable human experience. This sounds like a poem of contradiction. Desiring connection but also hating it. Wanting to ...

Hey there! I started reading and then was like, well, that escalated quickly! Maybe Amias was just hangry, haha. Is Amias an animal? Reading this made me wonder if this ...

Hi gruzinkerbell! I really enjoyed your poem. I have all these thoughts in my head, Not enough are centered on you. Probably my favorite part of this poem. I love ...

Hi Avian! I found your poem, sloth, very thought provoking and deeply felt it. Thanks for sharing it with us! Here are some of the parts that stood out to ...

Hi Shredder! I liked the premise of your story. It actually really reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe's Tell Tale Heart and The Raven combined. Even though those are poems, ...