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Ok I'm sorry silented1 but ..uh...she's mainly right..:P hahaha not all boys are like that but all boys CAN be like that..:P (girls can too btw) its a nice piece...ha..keep ...

Aww...I couldve sworn a tear came to my eye as i read this.... youve got talent....seriously...:) keep up the good work..:D and i was surprised to see that you were ...

Really nice... YOu've got talent like most people (if not all) that get on this website.... Keep up the good work.. i have no real critiscim (idk how to spell ...

It is very good... Its deep in emotion.... It also gives us a clue about you.. and those poems...which are most... always end up bein the best... :D Keep up ...

Wow, Its really good.... Although it kinda leaves people depressed... Its sad...but its good... The depth of desrciption is also very well written.. Thats one thing im workin on....heehee! :P ...

Welcome to YWS..:D Your poem kinda left me speechless Good job... (oh and the speechless thing is a good thing just to let you know..:P)

I agree....that it is very demanding in reading it....:P It is interesting, yet simple, and fun to read... You kinda have to catch up with the rhythm of it... But ...

I likey! I kinda got lost..... but thats easy for me to do anywhere... Hee! Hee! :) Its nice... Keep up the good work :)

It is amazing how many people write about rain. I dont think I've gotten to even half of the people that do. I am one of them. Hee! Hee! I ...

This is a really good poem, I like it. then again I like alot of things...hehe :P starred it...:) Keep up the good work..=)

Wow, I really like it. And the picture to add with it is nice. :) keep up the good work :)

Well this seems to be a pretty famous poem, ha, I really like this, and the beginning sounds mysterious and magical... Dont say that somethings bad until you give it ...

This is nice, but i found myself lost, Im not sure if its just me but, Whats the main subject? The words are well written, but i got lost. other ...

Hey there, I really like this. Its mysterious and it describes a beautifull place from what i can see. ha. I really like this...:D Keep it up! :D

Hey there, I like this I really do. :) I dont have much to say except to keep up the good work. :D