babydollblues

This was a very nice poem and I really liked the contradiction in your wording. The only real problems I have with your poem is your structure, tenses, and (a ...

In the first paragraph, in the sentence "I didn’t know why he was in that pose, but it was the pose I would see everything I looked back.", I think ...

I thought this was going to be really edgy, honestly. And I love that you just turned a regular holiday and told it from this satirical point of view. When ...

This is a very simple poem. But simple is genius in the case of this poem. There is quite a bit of understanding in this poem, even though it is ...

I really like this poem, your use of the italicized words in between stanzas was a great touch. One thing I would say about this is the use of punctuation. ...

Your poem is one that I look for on here. Your use of objects in relation to feelings and touch was a brilliant addition to the poem, especially the use ...

This poem has a very loving and sad vibe going on. I love your usage of tangible items, especially the cologne and hand. I wanted more of those because it ...

This is a very loving and bittersweet poem. It very much speaks to me as a reader and that is what writing should do. The only problem I really have ...

This is a lovely poem, your imagery is very on point. The only thing with poems is when you put a comma after a line, you're supposed to split off ...

Your family must love you, no matter what. Even if you often behave like a nut. They don’t care if you’re lazy or if you swear. They love you because ...

This is a lovely poem. The poem flows so well and is so easy to read even while being very long. Your imagery is impeccable and goes hand in hand ...

You have wonderful imagery and there is a warmth and a blue feeling to these poems, you're making the reader feel the mood. The only problem I'm finding is comma ...

Okay, let me start off with this, miyazaki is everything. Now on to the poem. I really like it, the only real big problem is that there is hardly any ...

I feel like you could really add on to this, using more detail and descriptive wording. The only big, glowing errors I really see are your spacing and word choice, ...

Very lovely poem, very lovely message. Reading through I could only find one mistake and then the rest I will be talking about is personal changes I would make. The ...