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Hello, wafflewolf7, Shane here for a (hopefully) helpful review of your own, Detonator. Feel free to take my suggestions with a grain of salt; it's your work, after all! My ...

Radrook, hello! Shane here for a (hopefully) helpful review of your poem Peaceful Pitbull. Before I begin, I want to point out that I do not wish to offend you, ...

Hi, Radrook! Shane here for a review. Hopefully I can do your work justice; I am always blown away by them. Anyway, on to the review! Grammar/ Spelling Overall, I ...

Hello, Shane here for a (hopefully) helpful review! I'm not the best at story reviews, as I lose my focus easily with longer pieces, but here we go! This was ...

Hey JustPerks! Shane here for a (hopefully) helpful review! I'm not the best at story review, as I tend to lose focus easily, but I'll try my best! First, I ...

Oh my god. This is what I needed today. It made me cry, dude! And you've only been on YWS for three days? Incredible! Overall thoughts: I loved the plot. ...

hello junel! shane here for another review! overall, i did really enjoy this poem. whether the wording, or something else, i got a sort of "pull" from it. it was ...

hello, junel! shane here for a quick review! overall, i really like your poem. it feels raw and real. fabulous work! as for suggestions, i advise putting some commas, and ...

hi harsh1997! shane here for a quick review! overall, this is pretty well written poem. i like the symbolism you used. well done! my two biggest critiques are the shortening ...

hello! shane here for a review! i like the plot, the idea, for this story. i feel like you could get really far, if you choose. you have a great ...

hi! shane here for a quick review! overall thoughts: i love this poem. the flow is wonderful, and it has an easy going feel when reading it. structure: i feel ...

hi, whosabellcanwrite! shane here for a short review! disclaimer: these are only suggestions. feel free to use them, or don't. I don't own you :) now, on to the review! ...

Hi, Flumadiddle! Shane here for a quick review! ... A really quick one, actually! XD This poem has a very clear message, and I like that you chose this format, ...

Hi there! Shane here for a review! Before I begin, I loved reading this poem. I felt every word of it. The rhyme scheme was simple (A,B,C,B), but added a ...

Hi, Shane here for a quick review! Overall, I really liked this poem. It portrays a clear message, while still being entertaining and energetic. For the sake of my sanity ...