Hi there! Shane here for a review!
Before I begin, I loved reading this poem. I felt every word of it. The rhyme scheme was simple (A,B,C,B), but added a sense of professionalism, while still keeping it simple.
I found the title to be a bit weak. I did see that the title and the first line are the same, so I suppose that's where you got it, but the theme of "don't make me remember" stretches through out the poem.
The next thing is just a formatting preference. I didn't think that the dashes between each stanza were necessary. They seemed out of place.
Finally, I feel as if the last stanza is a little awkward. The second and last lines (of the last stanza) don't "conform" to the rhyme scheme I mentioned above.
Well, I suppose that's all! This was a wonderfully well written piece; fabulous job!
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