artybirdy

Artstyx's ready for a review - finally! First of all, I liked this short story because it was "on the point". You have established the characters and given us some ...

Whew! I really have no words to describe just how awesome your story was. I couldn’t stop reading. I loved the way you incorporated the poem and flashbacks between their ...

I love reading horror stories, so your story intrigued me. I liked the twist you gave to a normal, romantic date. It’s an original concept, which I enjoyed reading. However, ...

God! I'm speechless. This is such a beautiful piece. There are few people in our lives who, without realising, change our perspective of how we view the world. It’s emotional ...

Interesting title! It matches perfectly to your story. There are a couple of things you need to improve. 1. The indentation of the first paragraph. It’s not consistent with the ...

This is a heart touching article/essay. I love the honesty and positivity you reflect in here. It’s always interesting to discuss people’s opinions on such deep topics. It’s definitely a ...

Is there more to this story? If not, I think it should be classed as poetry. It’d be more appropriate in that format because it does have a consistent rhyming ...

That gave me the shivers. It was creepy! I was not expecting at all. Seeing the title, I thought it might be a cliché love story, but you proved me ...

OK, just to tell you, I'm not an expert at reviewing raps. Hence, I apologise in advance if my review is of no help to you. Moving on, the first ...

This is a good start! You have established your characters, the conflict, and introduced potential obstacles (at least I think so). I liked how you started by setting the scene. ...

This is a concept I have never read before! I applaud your originality. I loved the dialogues shared between Tobias and Vivian. Though there’s a sense of frustration and adamancy, ...

I understand this might be the start of your novel and that’s why it was short. However, as your reader, I’d like more descriptions/details, so I’m eager to read ahead. ...

Good attempt! I liked that you chose to show us thoughts from both perspectives, so it isn’t one-sided and their actions can be justified. Well done for being able to ...

I found this poem to be dark and extremely sad. The speaker appears to be the harshest critic of themselves. They are having doubts about facing life and struggles. They ...

This poem is a little emotional for me as I love Art. Colours mean everything to me because they are my representation of certain objects or people, so I could ...