Young Writers Society

I thought it was an inspirational and up-lifting piece. Though I agree that readers tend to focus more on the theme and plot, or characters even, I believe that the ...

Hello, Eros! Feel lucky, your work is the first I have reviewed this month. ;) It is great to see you expand your writing to literary forms other than poems. ...

Happy Review Day! First impressions: this chapter is intense. It didn’t feel like a FanFic as the characters appeared to stand-alone, and had their own fears and conflicts. I didn’t ...

Happy Review Day! I’m artybirdy and I’m here to review your work. This piece caught my eye because it’s very realistic and powerful in terms of expressing thoughts and feelings ...

I’m definitely looking forward to reading more of this. You have captured my interest in a short and dramatic chapter. I loved it. Let me know when you post the ...

Hello! I haven’t reviewed any scripts lately and, therefore, I might not be of much help. You have portrayed a realistic issue and, because of its simplicity, not did I ...

Oh, my God! This is absolutely fantastic. You have realistically described the nature of a kind person and done a marvellous job at it! You tried to portray that they ...

That’s more like it! I enjoyed this chapter tremendously because it raised many questions in my mind, not necessarily to confuse me but to pique my interest. It couldn’t have ...

Hello, I’m back again! Unlike @Lau2001, I’m not majorly disappointed. I mean, you have given us some sort of closure about what caused the apocalypse to happen, and that’s more ...

I stumbled across your story in the “books” section and decided to review it. Your word choice’s great. I can tell you have an extensive vocabulary because of words like ...

Hello! I came across your story in the “books” section and decided to review it. :) I’m confused about her and Julien’s relationship. You haven’t made it clear enough. Are ...

Hiya! I stumbled across your story in the “books” section and decided to review it. :) Chapter One I’m assuming they are in a children’s home. You have introduced too ...

I was looking through the “books” section and came across your story. Format & Structure Firstly, your entire story’s in one massive paragraph. This is majorly distracting because I often ...

Hello, I’m here to review! First things first, I’m not sure if I should be relieved that Drak’s alive. You left the last chapter on such a cliff-hanger that I ...

I’m here to review! Are you planning to continue this story, or will it remain as it is? If it ends like this, then it should be categorised as a ...