You were reading your book that is finally publish after 5 years of writing and editing. You were reading many people who comment on your book how great and brilliant you are, so you started reading your own book and also enjoying it. Then you were on chapter 3 and you see 3 and more misspelled word like OMG, so hilarious and embarrassing and it is ALREADY publish and send out to the world and stores to sell it. Chapter 3 The Embarrasing Moment I want to this tore and slip and fal and people were staring at me and i was embarrased and my my boyfrioend was here staring at me. Your like in PANIC! Thinking " OMG, WHAT TO DO! I AM GOING TO BE EMBARRASSED IN FRONT OF MY READERS AND FANS! OMG, OMG!" You are in PANIC PANIC PANIC PANIC, walking back and forth in your room. CHILL!!! You don't need to worry because " Nobody is perfect " Everybody do mistakes like spilling food and pee in their pants when they were a baby. The reader cares about your story and your plot NOT the misspelled word. "Yup I unersand yur hendwitn jst lke i du naw." They might even think you did it on purpose and say: "I love the way you write this it is so unique and stylist. I love the way you write your words mispelled and it is cool" or your reader is like whatever because if your story so interesting no one care about the mispelled word an punctuation. So don't you panic because your unique and intelligent, everybody makes mistakes. Live it through! " Don't you worry little mind, Fill with magical and fantasy things, One mistakes are easy to find, It is not important as you think, your unique in your life, and your intelligent is always maximize."
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After reading this piece, I can truly say one thing: It's from the heart. It is true it's hard to write from the heart these days, especially with the grammar gambling and what not with the war of the words. If words can convey the idea or just the gist, enough to give the reader ample material for visualizing the images, you win as a writer. True, one does need to fix grammatical errors and the tiny stuff but at the end of the day, they're just tools. Tools used to polish the writing. The ideas are the main stuff. Ideas give life to the images. Tools and accessories adorn them.
I think maybe that's what you're trying to say in the last few lines?
The beauty is in the birth of the the fantasy, the birth of the realms one creates with words? Mistakes are like clogs. You can't polish something if it doesn't exist. So in that sense, mistakes are less important than the main creations.
Really loving the article. Keep it up!
Also, one thing I learned about grammar is whatever I learned, it's not through the rules of some book. I just imagine the images and string them together like I am slinging something like magic. I don't know how or why but it works for me. In case you are interested, check out Grammar Girl's Ultimate Writing Guide For Students. Just a suggestion. It'll add firepower to your writing and add some extra tools.
If you construct a fantasy world like a RPG, why not add more fun with tools and weaponry (badass grammar), right?
Keep on writing. I enjoyed this! I will keep reading your stuff. I love the content!
I thought it was an inspirational and up-lifting piece. Though I agree that readers tend to focus more on the theme and plot, or characters even, I believe that the technical aspects are equally important to tell an effective and enjoyable story.
There are points I'd like to raise.
1. Before any form of literature is actually published, authors hire professional editors to look and thoroughly read through them, spot any mistakes, and correct them. Therefore, it is unlikely that they would not pick up on little spelling errors that you'd notice years later.
2. I'm not sure if I understand the purpose of the formatting you have chosen to present your thoughts. To put it simply, it looks very messy. I would suggest you to make it consistent, so it does not deter your readers.
Overall, good effort. Well done, and keep writing!
the messy thing part when i write it it is neat but when i post it it is messy
Hello xv0nilla Writerx !!!
This is Eros here to review your new work!
I liked this short piece of writing. It has good message. It is really motivating. You are to convince and trying to calm down the panic-ed souls of writers. You are trying to state the importance to the plot and theme of the story rather than the mistakes done in it. I like your way of expressing things. And all the thoughts which you have put up so beautifully, all makes me inspired ad motivated. I like how you have used different situations, in which everyone does some mistake.
And like a cherry on the top of a beautiful and decorated cake, you have used these lines:
Everything, just so nicee!
Keep writing...
For we all love to keep reading them...!
thank you Eros for your review and i will keep writing.